it's either "demon empress" or "demoness emperor". you don't need female gender version of both words to identify one individual.
writing for this story has already been completed AFAIK. it would be interesting on how the boys try to get Amy. she is smart enough to figure out something is amiss, particularly since these guys had issues with Alan before. it shouldn't work unless she falls into the trap because of her friends.
Food?
Your immortal titles are pretty cool.
How did JY's companions miss the beast if its size was as you described?
I understand the need to minimize drama, but the reunion of two characters with this much history requires it. Also, no sane mature adult will drop the "I love you" bomb here, that too in public. Even if he had an ulterior motive, the timing of this makes no sense. JY's assist in this matter is also unnecessary. I would strongly suggest rewriting the dialogue in this chapter. It is too simplistic where more nuance is necessary.
so, we hit the climax? quite anticlimactic lol. at least give us Achilles vs DXX vs JY in any order.
Harem Protagonist EX strikes again XD!
I hope the fight doesn't end with each of them only exchanging big moves.
femme Fatale! nice!
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