The plot, art, pacing, character development all suck
He doesn't even try to figure out his powers or anything, he just magically knows it. And boy, for someone who was weak, he sure looked cocky and confident on the retake.
This is trash, you trippin🤣
hehe😌 first
The MC resembles a bit of Kita and Kiryuu+Ushijima
I haven't gone too far in the novel so my review may change later on. After reading the review of Jasonenrick, you did alright. The story seems like it's good so far but the view you're giving us is an "eh" Also your grammar lowkey sucks. For instance, punctuation. You seem like you don't really know when to use them and your spelling is sometimes off too. I suggest you download Grammarly as it should help you out with punctuation and spelling or get an editor. If you need an editor, I can always help :)
3-6*
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"I loved her more than myself, I gave her everything that I can but... she left me and went with the other guy whose just slightly handsome and rich than me." The man said while sobbing.
H Mission Commencing!!
Anime & Comics · Kahel