Can u stop the suspense and mass update the following chapters faster
Please can you update more chapters
Then u should find a way to separate both mia and Jean from falling for each other or having any sexual intercourse because the story is getting predictable like some of the stories I have read.You should at make it unpredictable. So big fatty use your imagination and find a way to break them up before it gets too late and people start dropping your novel for the other because there is potential in this novel find u make it right and find your mistakes fast. And what is the point in having a chemistry with a married woman and flirting with with her in front of everyone. Please make sure you fix it before it gets out of hands and by the way I love the way you started the story so don't disappoint me.
Why,write such a dull and boring story,at the start of the story was good but why give a married woman to someone else clearly knowing she married and is on good terms with her husband and clearly still loves her husband. I suggest u change the storyline quick to avoid ruining the story.
can u please update the chapters fast
can u please release the next chapters early
Nice story but can u update it faster
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