The world background is just the run of the mill traveler story. It holds great potential compared to any other story I’ve read, but the writing quality is just horrendous. It seems you’re tyring your best, but the grammar is to a level that is difficult to read. I do hope it gets better as you write.
"His aura's off…" Shikamaru pondered.
Naruto: I Copy Skills
Anime & Comics · DrWright
It would be cool to have a mage in a martial world
Author : And how is Tai Lung's human form? He is rarely going to be in that state since as mentioned, it is weaker but just wanted to know your thoughts.
More than a Dragon Warrior
Movies · Emmanuel_Capricorn
The story is great, but it lack fluidity in a sense. It’s more of a sitcom-ish feel with how much time passes between chapters. We don’t really bond with the Main Character, ie struggles, success, and mediocrity. It gets better during the latter half of the story but it feels like a different person to who we we’re introduced.
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sauce?
"Don't speak. Listen up. You move an inch, you die. You attempt to use your powers in any way, you die. Blink once if you hear and understand my words." I spoke.
I Am Doom (Marvel)
Anime & Comics · ArifuretaForever
I really love musical skills
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DOT PART!!
my dot fr gang
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original Becoming A Tyrant After My Fruit’s Awakening
John Keynes bound tyrant system. Open the novice spree and get the superhuman black hole fruit. Kill one of the Warlod of the Sea: Gecko Moria and gain high-level armament. Conquer Cavendish and gain high-level arrogance. Kill the rebel pursuers and gain domineering power. Returning to the country for revenge to succeed as king, and obtained the swordsmanship of the great swordsman. I own nothing, and this is just a translation.10 Chs 253 收藏
I like this concept
Clan God: Same thing with the God in Dragon ball. He will be a god but in Naruto. He will create a clan and build the clan up. There will also be other guns in the picture so he will need to help the clan survive.
One Piece: Creating A Kingdom Using Summons!
Anime & Comics · TheWriterButters