Aaaand i still love it!
I see that his story in 'human' world is starting, at least the part where he is interested in underground qi users where he tries to fit in. So after adventuring with his friends/family/clan where he was bold but and frinedly, in this part i feel bit detached from his surrounding, because again this is a start of this part. And this was heart-warming chapter, thus the comment 😚❤️Didnt mean it to be rude 🙄 Story is interesting as it was from the start.
I see you are still keeping it interesting with interlooping chapters like this. It started to get bit grey with just his human body and affairs, big thumbs up for this one 👍😍😋
QI user in cyber body, exchanging wood for a metal. I am starting to get deus-ex game vibes here 😘✨ Nice one.
Wooow😍 Nice one! It's getting more and more interesting.
Like a Lego 😜✨
Well done 😊✨❤️
Could be that he dosent want to push her ideas farther then needed when he is not sure where she stands.
Well it was fun reading it, but I wont pay to read it in such a stupid e-book reader, so thanks until now! I will be there again when you switch to Patre*n ;)
Supreme Magus
Fantasy · Legion20