Duh! I'm on yet another read thru 😁 (it fills time while I wait for updates lol)....I'm not sure why at that time I was thinking something different than every other.
I liked the story. Though it could definitely use some editing. There a LOT of places where he/she/him/her were mixed up.
How is Dharvey in class when she is in Gehanna??
It was already the afternoon and Angeal, Arlo, Arvid, Frey, and Dharvey were already having their classes. Usually in the afternoon, each of them would be having their major classes of their degree so they don't usually meet each other unless they plan to go home together.
Fantasy · MysticAmy
This sentence makes absolutely zero sense
"I found out that a Soul Eater can control his or her hunger of souls if he or she makes wine with his or her lover by having sex!"
Fantasy · MysticAmy
Guess she'll have to wear wet clothes when she shifts back lol
I didn't waste any time jumping in the cold water and cleaning the mud from my fur. Once I was clean, I shake off the excess water and took off again.
Fantasy · kriyachauhan
Into the pool fully clothed I see or did their clothes come off in the few seconds between being outside and walking to the pool??
Flashing an inviting smile, Alex stretched out his hand for her. Abi could only reach out and she let him help her into the pool.
Fantasy · KazzenlX
Erika is the one in the hospital, they couldn't ID the body so how can she the 'murdered' person
Bree bit her lip and scowled at Dawn. Her nostrils flared and her nails dig in her palm. The bitch was too smart. But one thing was sure, she was going to go to the jail for murdering Erika.
Fantasy · MishaK
If memory serves, that was not the name of her pack
As Dawn kept looking at Volara, the gates opened again and even before the contestant was in the center, Sedora announced, "Welcome our fifth entrant, the Lykae princess of the red moon clan, Pia Silver."
Fantasy · MishaK
I was starting to wonder where the link between the two stories would be
Thanks to some quick phone calls and contacts that Thea had, we were able to procure a private plane. She apparently knew a man by the name of Dietrich that even she had to answer to. I guess there was someone that governed all the vampires just like the famed Luna Queen of shifter legend. She wasn't real though, so we didn't need to worry about that just yet.
Fantasy · Deni_Chance
It's been bugging me since I started this volume but have to say that I am not a fan of the new babies name.To me, it rolls off the tounge funny. I understand the reasons behind her name but think it would have sounded better if it was Reesalynn. Just my opinion though 🙂
I woke early and got dressed alongside Reece. He and I were wearing nicer clothes, but something that was still comfortable. We didn't want to throw our wealth into the faces of others either, although anyone who knew our names knew that we were some of the wealthiest people in the world, so that was pretty hard to do. Still, we got dressed like we usually did. I wore a dress that didn't hide my belly this time. I wasn't going to hide Reeselynn this time around.
Chosen by Fate, Rejected by the Alpha
Fantasy · Deni_Chance