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BookFan_
BookFan_
1 years ago
Commented

He is getting too arrogant and paranoid. She already signed a soul contact. He should listen to what she has to say instead of being a paranoid idot.

The thing was he indeed knew the pain of a soul injury, but he was not about to openly admit to a woman he did not trust that this soul was already injured. So he continued to let her rant. 

Re: Evolution Online

Re: Evolution Online

Fantasy · Yolohy

BookFan_
BookFan_
1 years ago
Commented

Shabby Meaning - In poor condition due to long use or lack of care. NEW CLOTHES ARE NOT SHABBY. !!

The young man who they thought was very poor due to his shabby clothes turns out the real owner of the expensive looking yacht.

Face-Slapping System

Face-Slapping System

Urban · StiffStick

BookFan_
BookFan_
1 years ago
Commented

Why are you so contradictory!? You said he looked slimmer than lvl 1 but definately more muscular than before the system. Before the system.. he was like a stick. Now you're saying his thinner than even that!!? Tf dude.

After his last transformation, Roland has already grown taller than Bryan. And even though his body looked, and might even be slimmer than before, Roland's strength was countless times stronger than before.

Face-Slapping System

Face-Slapping System

Urban · StiffStick

BookFan_
BookFan_
2 years ago
Commented

When will he get the old Leo's artifacts? Are we just going to forget about it? He was supposed to get it by now!

After paying the money, Leo sighed inwardly, 'I can't believe I have already spent over 50,000 today. While I may earn a lot of money as an Adventurer, it can also get very expensive being one, and I haven't even purchased any artifacts yet.'

Magic System in a Parallel World

Magic System in a Parallel World

Fantasy · MyLittleBrother

BookFan_
BookFan_
2 years ago
Commented

Isn't his badge supposed to stop him from getting injured.? How does he get seriously injured twice in 1 game? This whole thing feels too forced to make up a good excuse for them loosing in the Top 8.

BookFan_
BookFan_
2 years ago
Posted

This Novel is Really Starting with a Bang! It really Looks Promising. I'm surprised that the Author started writing this on a Whim Yesterday. And this is His First Novel. The English is Amazing and Both the Synopsis and the Prologue are Bang On!.. If is First is This Good.. I'm wondering what his Slowly thought out and Planned Novel would look like. I'm hoping we won't have to wait too long to find out.

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