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I like reading good books, working out and eating good food. Love the simple life, really. Not here to get into arguments, just to have some fun!

2020-09-25 加入 United Kingdom
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1 years ago
Replied to Yunick

Then why are you reading DC at all? Character interactions, drama and suspense are what make DC great. Not all comic runs are "Hero fights villain and wins". A lot of the all-time great runs are about the hero struggling with something personal and overcoming it--or not overcoming it. Injustice is all about Superman dealing with the anger and grief of killing his wife (and unborn child) while under the effects of the fear toxin, and trying to adapt to that while changing how he treats 'helping' the world.

(Author Note: Emotions and such get pretty hefty in this chapter. Panic attacks and such, which is understandable in the MC's position. Don't like a dude showing weakness because it harms your self-inserting? Not my problem, fellas.

DCAU: Saiyan

DCAU: Saiyan

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1 years ago
Replied to pratiksymbol

Okay but let me put another quote from the wiki here: "Saiyans and their hybrid counterparts are naturally adept at using Ki. They generally have no difficulty manipulating their energy". It basically refutes what you're saying. It says it right there that they have no trouble with Ki Control lol. I'd like to also add that the MC's Ki wasn't enhancing him when he did the first lifts. That was just raw physical power. Goku struggled with 40 tons in the Buu Saga, so 5 tons is pretty high for what you're calling a 'weak' Saiyan.

I'd already figured out how to do the first thing. I could enhance my body so that it was three times stronger, harder and quicker. Which was only the beginning - it's lacking amount of enhancement was purely because of my lacking Ki Control. If I tried any higher than a 3x multiplier my Ki would break from my control, overload my body and cause damage. So here I was, cross-legged and held up by nothing but my tail as I started my meditation with deep breathing exercises.

DCAU: Saiyan

DCAU: Saiyan

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1 years ago
Replied to pratiksymbol

I'm not doing power level stuff. Not even Dragon Ball does power level stuff anymore. It's too inconsistent. Besides, he's in the DC Universe. Why would I give the MC the ability to destroy planets after only having a PL of thousands? That's just a recipe for writing myself into a corner.

Okay, easy enough. "Okay, uh, my name is Ethan Blaine, I'm twenty-three years old and my favorite color is either red or yellow," or blue like your eyes I nearly said and I felt like smacking myself over the back of the head. Not the fucking time, Ethan. Fucking hell. Time and a place for something, and right now isn't the time to try and pathetically flirt with Wonder Woman!

DCAU: Saiyan

DCAU: Saiyan

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1 years ago
Replied to IamWuxiaMaster

There could be a logistics error or maybe they were playing a mental game to get him to admit something.

Why wasn't I in those records? Why did they look at me weird when I mentioned the Shard? Why did they keep saying my family and friends don't exist?

DCAU: Saiyan

DCAU: Saiyan

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1 years ago
Replied to Proxx

You're the first person to call the MC powerful lol. Anyway, the MC is winging it with his Ki training at the minute because he doesn't really have anyone to train him, so that's most likely why it doesn't feel like the original. I can't give you a rough estimate because I'm staying well away from PL stuff. Purely because if I add it, the protagonist's power-scaling will become ridiculous very quickly. It only takes thousands of PL to be able to destroy a whole planet, for instance. I don't want for that to happen because it doesn't mesh well with DC at all.

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1 years ago
Replied to Yunick

Also, this isn't a db fanfic. It's a DC fanfic.

(Author Note: Emotions and such get pretty hefty in this chapter. Panic attacks and such, which is understandable in the MC's position. Don't like a dude showing weakness because it harms your self-inserting? Not my problem, fellas.

DCAU: Saiyan

DCAU: Saiyan

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1 years ago
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Ok. Goodbye then.

(Author Note: Emotions and such get pretty hefty in this chapter. Panic attacks and such, which is understandable in the MC's position. Don't like a dude showing weakness because it harms your self-inserting? Not my problem, fellas.

DCAU: Saiyan

DCAU: Saiyan

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1 years ago
Replied to pratiksymbol

Taken straight from the official db wiki: "Saiyans have a natural affinity to control Ki energy" Now, if that doesn't say they can have Ki Control, I don't know what would. The reason Raditz didn't have Ki Control is because it isn't taught to Saiyans. They believe in raw power, not control of their power. They didn't think it was important but the MC knows otherwise. Also, yes they can lower their power. Vegeta lowered his power in the Namek/Frieza Saga so Krillin could injure him and so he could get an easy Zenkai Boost.

I'd already figured out how to do the first thing. I could enhance my body so that it was three times stronger, harder and quicker. Which was only the beginning - it's lacking amount of enhancement was purely because of my lacking Ki Control. If I tried any higher than a 3x multiplier my Ki would break from my control, overload my body and cause damage. So here I was, cross-legged and held up by nothing but my tail as I started my meditation with deep breathing exercises.

DCAU: Saiyan

DCAU: Saiyan

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1 years ago
Replied to Iseeyou

They don't. The training room on the Watchtower is less of a training room than you'd think and more of a way to measure new League members. Most DC heroes don't get stronger through training. Superman only needs to sunbathe. Wonder Woman is basically at her peak physically because of her divine nature. So on and so forth for the rest of the League too.

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1 years ago
Replied to pratiksymbol

You do realize I cannot realistically take your opinion into account because you just showed how biased you are when you admitted you're a dragon ball fanboy, right? I'm not trying to antagonize you either. Simply giving my opinion on your comment like you have on my story.

Okay, easy enough. "Okay, uh, my name is Ethan Blaine, I'm twenty-three years old and my favorite color is either red or yellow," or blue like your eyes I nearly said and I felt like smacking myself over the back of the head. Not the fucking time, Ethan. Fucking hell. Time and a place for something, and right now isn't the time to try and pathetically flirt with Wonder Woman!

DCAU: Saiyan

DCAU: Saiyan

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  • DCAU: Saiyan original

    DCAU: Saiyan

    TV ACTION ROMANCE ADVENTURE R18 WEAKTOSTRONG DARK SUPERPOWERS TRANSMIGRATION DC

    4.61

    *Heads up, the MC is NOT Broly, despite what the cover pic might tell you. He only shares a similar appearance.* Ethan Blaine went to sleep one night, alone. He woke up alone as well. Alone in an Attack Ball hurtling toward Earth. Said spaceship, the fact he had a tail and a distinct urge to fight *anything* he could told him what he was. While he probably wouldn't ever come to terms with that, he could live with it. Then he realized where he was. Now that...that wasn't something so easy to come to terms with. (MC isn't gonna be an edgy power-hungry jerk, so if that's what gets your rocks off when you're reading, look elsewhere please. This ain't gonna be for you. And to those of you who look for a protagonist who's the picture of calm and serenity and perfectly crafted plans or schemes that make their jaunt in a new dimension child's play...this also isn't gonna be for you. Ethan will do much, much better than the average person but new physiology aside he's still a normal person. Don't expect him to be perfect and infallible. Oh and expect smut, unrealistic behavior and relationships. If you don't like that stuff, that's cool, but this probably won't be for you. Edit: Because of a recent review, I'd like to reiterate something. The MC isn't gonna instantly adapt to being transmigrated and finding himself in DC. If you're expecting someone who can just find their entire previous life upended, the loss of their entire family and friends just peachy and then go about their business--this story isn't for you. Heed the warning before reading. Edit numero dos: I thought I'd made myself clear but I guess not. If you're expecting an OP protagonist or a protagonist who doesn't need to work for every little scrap of power he will someday hold - then this isn't the story for you. If you wanna see a guy work hard for it? Great. Hop on the ride and I'll show it to you. If not? That's also fine. Just don't complain about it.)

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  • MCU: Hanma original

    MCU: Hanma

    Movies ACTION ROMANCE REINCARNATION R18 MARVEL

    4.76

    A martial arts fanatic who obsessively cultivated his personal strength through sheer will and unmatched selfishness is reincarnated with the body of an Ogre and the genetics of a Monster. Put together, and with his unwavering conviction, he's left with no limits and no barriers holding him back from fulfilling a dream of his. To be the Strongest Creature on Earth. Gods will tremble and Demons will hide, all because a monstrous Ogre has arrived.

    3 Chs 855 收藏