SmilingC

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SmilingC
SmilingC
9 days ago
Commented

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To DC X Rider readers. I will now be updating this story weekly. Don't worry because the chapters will be longer.

Kamen Rider in DC

Kamen Rider in DC

Anime & Comics · Najicablitz626

SmilingC
SmilingC
9 days ago
Replied to NoneAbove

that might be true but what would be his Orphnoch form and don't say Wolf because that one is so boring and over used in so many different stories, Haruka should definitely be a different kind of Orphnoch maybe one of the lesser known ones, but not one that is overpowered

[Yes, Host. The Orphnoch DNA has been successfully integrated. You should now be able to utilize the Faiz Driver NEXT without any issues.]

Kamen Rider in DC

Kamen Rider in DC

Anime & Comics · Najicablitz626

SmilingC
SmilingC
10 days ago
Replied to SmilingC

I ask because, nothing never ever good comes from altering or even adding something to a person's DNA especially something that seems to come with no problem, there is absolutely a catch and it's going to leer it's head out soon

[Yes, Host. The Orphnoch DNA has been successfully integrated. You should now be able to utilize the Faiz Driver NEXT without any issues.]

Kamen Rider in DC

Kamen Rider in DC

Anime & Comics · Najicablitz626

SmilingC
SmilingC
10 days ago
Commented

would there any side effect from acquiring the Orphnoch DNA or is it a limited charge kinda like with Kaixa?

[Yes, Host. The Orphnoch DNA has been successfully integrated. You should now be able to utilize the Faiz Driver NEXT without any issues.]

Kamen Rider in DC

Kamen Rider in DC

Anime & Comics · Najicablitz626

SmilingC
SmilingC
18 days ago
Commented

yeah I can say it should be rewritten, it was good at first but kinda became hard to read later on, I agree that he shouldn't have access to all the forms but maybe do a unique way he could gain new forms or even try making original forms that derives from the material or devices of the Kamen Rider series also the MC's personality leaned too much to good and is kinda counter productive for a goody guy to have a secret team that kills without mercy and IDK if you were going down that path but if you were please for the love of God don't make it into a Harem story. Those are so annoying and weak and wouldn't even work as harems are actually illegal in multiple countries including America I might add so it wouldn't or should've work at all just getting it off my chest and just to clarify I hate Harem stories too many on this site and they are all weak and Pathetic

SmilingC
SmilingC
1 months ago
Commented

Cana not Kana

While they might have been weak in the game, they were quite strong here—at least Kana couldn't easily hit them with her cards like she could with the Stone Beetle.

Fairy Tail: I Absolutely Refuse to Be the Guild Master

Fairy Tail: I Absolutely Refuse to Be the Guild Master

Anime & Comics · ahan5000

SmilingC
SmilingC
1 months ago
Replied to SmilingC

also his Guild was called "Titan Nose" not "Nose of The Giant"

"'Red Sky Borra,' expelled by the formal guild 'Nose of the Giant' for theft, is currently wandering the border area between the Kingdom of Fiore and the Kingdom of Bosco, occasionally committing crimes..."

Fairy Tail: I Absolutely Refuse to Be the Guild Master

Fairy Tail: I Absolutely Refuse to Be the Guild Master

Anime & Comics · ahan5000

SmilingC
SmilingC
1 months ago
Commented

Bora only has 1 r in his name and his epithet is Bora of Prominence not Red Sky

"'Red Sky Borra,' expelled by the formal guild 'Nose of the Giant' for theft, is currently wandering the border area between the Kingdom of Fiore and the Kingdom of Bosco, occasionally committing crimes..."

Fairy Tail: I Absolutely Refuse to Be the Guild Master

Fairy Tail: I Absolutely Refuse to Be the Guild Master

Anime & Comics · ahan5000

SmilingC
SmilingC
1 months ago
Commented

Gale-Force Reading Glasses

SmilingC
SmilingC
1 months ago
Commented

Cana's name starts with a "C" not a "K"

"Ah, since Kana isn't around, I'll be taking care of the betting this time. No need to worry!"

Fairy Tail: I Absolutely Refuse to Be the Guild Master

Fairy Tail: I Absolutely Refuse to Be the Guild Master

Anime & Comics · ahan5000