not completely . just on a pause right now while I was working on another book due to only having 3 active readers when I was originally publishing it. I have plans to get back to it around easter when I will have time off from my "day" job and be able to devote time to both books.
Foxner sorry for the grammar mistakes. A lot of it is due to me only having 2 hours each day to produce each chapter before having to leave for work. So I make what edits I can as I am typing each chapter each day but prioritize spelling when time gets short. Also, I do try to make sure I'm at least close to accurate when relating most things. But I hope you are still able to enjoy the story.
but thanks for the review.
I've never been good at romance so I'm only minimally touching that subject. And the only reason it insists on the romance tag is because of having a female lead. lol
the main characters are being developed nicely but the secondary characters are slower to develop. hints of the dragons to come are slowly being dropped.
See this! I just gifted the story: Luxury car
first few chapters might bore folks wanting to jump straight into the action but the character's backstories were explained while the characters were being developed. but once the characters get introduced things start getting interesting. btw, I tried to be honest but I am the author so my point of view might be a touch biased. so if you think differently (good and bad) post your own review or comment and I'll try to improve.
thank you dixeled. hopefully other readers will follow your example and start leaving comments and reviews. [img=recommend]
congrats on the Spring Creation contest they just announced winners/nominations(?) for. you truly did deserve it because, as someone who has literally read over 500 books in my lifetime, I can see how talented and dedicated you are to this book. now if you could boost production by giving up on sleep and learning how to write while using the toilet or taking a shower you might win over some of your more impatient haters. lol
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original The Onyx Dragon Queen
Archeologist Maelyn Khadim discovers a crystalline onyx dragon statue during a archeological project that infuses her with a system to help her transform into the dragon she was born to be and assume her place as Queen of her homeland's kingdom.155 Chs 644 收藏
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Rise Of Immortal Dawn
Dawn, along with a group of friends that also possess strong mental powers goes to explore space and gets asked by God to help with special missions that they are uniquely able to accomplish as he shows them how using science enabled him to create the universe and everything in it in just seven days.174 Chs 55 收藏
thank you for appreciating my twisted sense of humor. :) I must also thank you in that your positive feedback is helping me to finally finish climbing out of the hole I fell into ?
The Briefing
The Onyx Dragon Queen
Fantasy · Shannon_DeNure