徽章 20
Moments 29
Dar_Vortex
Wasted a chapter
Dar_Vortex
Is this the story? What a waste of chapters
Dar_Vortex
Over far too soon and felt rushed at the end. Would have been 5 stars if the end had felt natural
Dar_Vortex
Finished far too quickly as I would have loved to see more of ray and what happened to nior
Dar_Vortex
Totally ruins the flow
Dar_Vortex
Waste of 2 chapters
Dar_Vortex
2 chapters wasted again… stats appearing far too often and is just lazy writing
Dar_Vortex
When I see bonus chapter I just skip it as it’s just a copy and paste of the stats again… such lazy writing
Dar_Vortex
Don’t think I’ll read much more if it keeps copying and pasting stats Al the time
EeeTv
Tears blurred his eyes making his vision blurry. Granted, not that he would be able to see much of anything even if they weren't washing over his iris'. The thick black smoke cloying at his throat and swirling throughout the building in amongst red hot flames.
Naruto: Systematic Shinobi
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