I really like the changes in perspective from character to character; however, I feel that the sudden change from third person to first person is too jarring. Maybe try staying in the same point of view, but still switching between characters.
Hooray! He is back!!!
I had very high expectations coming into this novel because of the quality of the author’s other work, “The Oracle Paths”, and I am very happy to say that I have not been disappointed. I would actually say that the novel is even better than I anticipated.
Is the novel dropped?
Ostrexora, on the other hand, had not given a damn since the beginning, just floating passively above them and gloating over their misfortune. If she had wanted to, none of this would have happened. Unfazed by the drama around her, she continued to act as if she didn't hear anything and an untold fury began to fester in Jake's mind.
The Oracle Paths
Sci-fi · Arkinslize
I personally like writing done in third person more, but I still think the chapter was still very good.
This was one of the first stories I started reading on webnovel and I really enjoy, no matter how long the wait between the chapters is.
I asked myself the same thing
It was aimed straight at Liu Bubai.
Binding to Geniuses To Become Stronger
Eastern · Li Hongtian
Yes, switching characters but staying in third-person limited pov compared to switching to first-person pov.
Bound to Evil
Urban · Barbare