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Last few chapters were a little bit weird but at the same time it's getting me wonder why do we need that info in plot. Does it change something or doesn't matter at all. Is it corrupted place or we have a demon's party in town.

Same characters, new chapter, new vibe

Guard is making her move. I think its a good plot twist, some passive action makes different vibe.

So far, I have a positive impression of the work, but let me give you some advice. It will be good if you give a plausible explanation why the Demon Lord does not want demons to walk on the earth. The first, not everyone has read your other work, and the second, this will greatly help in the development of the plot logic. Because some demons look like pacifist warriors or bees fighting honey.

This is not so much a braindead or dumb hero, but too naive. I think the main problem that mc is is like a hostage of "circumstances". In the begining, the hero did something, now he is only reacts, and does not act. Even when "playing" with partners, he gives the initiative. It's not bad in itself, but too ordinary life. "You are a hero not because you have strength, but because you make decisions and take responsibility."

It seems the name for the skill is too patriarchal. More suitable for declaring control over an area than a form of marriage.

Huntington family growing quickly.

After "finish him", i got the some kind of deja vu. It's th like Mortal Kombat phrase. About plot, i think author gave to many girls to mc from the start and relationships between them couldn't develop the same speed as reader expect to be. So we had a feeling that mc is too slow.

Pretty nice chapter. Soft and purr. But cat-girl as tank class character? Not ranger, rough or sped based class. Interesting, uncommon.

Let's be honest, this story doesn't have any mind-blowing plot twist, but... hey, does anybody remember the title of this novel? Like, we've read about some epic exp grind... both aspects of it (you know what I mean ;). Any new skills for mc, some progress, etc?