The MC is extremely annoying, he has zero common sense and is just constantly getting into trouble for no reason. honestly kind if pathetic.
This is actually really quite good. I'm enjoying the creative storytelling
your mc is an idiot who keeps following stupid ideas of Weasley and Potter rather than using his brain.
this is a ripoff of Ebenbild's story on fanfiction.
Makes no sense, very illogical and poorly constructed.
okay, we deserved that one. well done, slow clap, but do label the chapter with omake or it'll confuse people
And I'm done. This was a horrible story with no sense as it is and the author has decided to go for edgy Slytherin -- cliché and overdone nonsense. Bye.
No harem, it's bad enough that you are choosing to send him to Slytherin but a harem? It's like you want the most possible clichees in a story possible.
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I like the move to split the twins, so many cliches abound with them being the same person, but this is a nice take on a George who has had a different set of experiences and is maybe suited more to Ravenclaw. Really suits the interesting style that you're using in this story.
The Patron is a scam. He sets insane prices and delivers no chapters. don't sign up.
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