Daoist53SMHQ

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2020-06-20 加入 Global
徽章 3

Moments 2
Daoist53SMHQ
Daoist53SMHQ
1 years ago
Commented

it's good . the grammar and word spacing sometimes makes reading hard.

Daoist53SMHQ
Daoist53SMHQ
2 years ago
Posted

THE CHARACTER AND WORLD BUILDING IS GREAT, DANZO IS MORE THAN EMO SOCIOPATHIC HOKAGE WANNABE .... THE CHARACTER SHOWS BALANCE BETWEEN POWER UPS AND PLOT ARMORING.... NOT TOO OP EMMIDIATELY...... LIKES THE TEASING CHAPTERS AND SKILL DEVELOPMENT PACE OF THE STORY. PLEASE. DONT DROP... THE FEMALE TRANMIGRATORS WHERE THEY DONT FALL IN LOVE WITH ALL THE MALE CAST IS AS RARE AS MALE REINCARNATED THAT DOES NOT FALL IN LOVE WITH SOME OR ALL FEMALE CAST