Joshua_Battleday

Joshua_Battleday

male LV 15
2020-06-13 加入 United States
徽章 17

Moments 9
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Joshua_Battleday
1 years ago
Posted

Why is it that the characters gender keeps changing? And I don't mean by chapter, they change paragraph by paragraph .

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Joshua_Battleday
1 years ago
Commented

I, for one, like knowing where your twists and turns come from.

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Joshua_Battleday
2 years ago
Posted

This has a great beginning with excellent flow and storyline. I just hope that you'll continue it so that I can read more of this world you created.

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Joshua_Battleday
2 years ago
Posted

This has a great beginning with excellent flow and storyline. I just hope that you'll continue it so that I can read more of this world you created.

Joshua_Battleday
Joshua_Battleday
2 years ago
Posted

This has a great beginning with excellent flow and storyline. I just hope that you'll continue it so that I can read more of this world you created.

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Joshua_Battleday
2 years ago
Commented

lots of details, lots of repeated details.

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Joshua_Battleday
3 years ago
Commented

See this! I just gifted the story: Massage chair

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Joshua_Battleday
3 years ago
Posted

I really like this story and hope that you continue with it so that I can read more of it. The way you have zombies done in this is, for me at least, different and new.

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Joshua_Battleday
3 years ago
Posted

I really like this book. I hope that you continue to add more chapters. I like that the m/c being reincarnated becomes the tip of the spear of an intergalactic war.