Wow, tysm for such a thorough review! Best wishes for both of our stories!
This is good. I've always loved royalty themed story so it is easy to be immersed in this. I hope it gets better because I could already feel the looming danger in the next chaps. Aside from some sentence structures and grammar errors, I really saw its potential especially that the world building is constructed well and not to forget that there's some mysteries to look forward to. Kudos, author!
Ain't so sure about that.
Nooo! Poor horse-y but I guess it can't be helped.
Thank you! I've never really noticed that, maybe if I finish the story I'd check how to make things clearer for the first few chaps. Tysm!
This is cool and lit! The plot is really unique for me since I've never heard of this before. It's also easy to get sucked in because it's packed of a whole lot of mysteries. I really liked the world building, it might be few chapters in but I could already see the richness and vastness of the setting. Aside from few writing errors, I have no complain. I definitely could say this is a must read!
that was comical!
Who could have an appetite if you see this everyday.
hahaha sorry for the acronyms sometimes, can't help it.
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