One of the better opening chapters Ive read in awhile. I'm at the very keast intriqued enough to go forward.
Sorry but I have to call it quits on this series. The author seems to have taken the meandering path to fluff theur word count. I don't mind such diversions if their entertaining, but just to take three chapters to describe one visit including emotional connections already beaten like a dead horse into the story. Then to have said horse resurrected as a zombie and then beaten down again is just too much. I quit.
REVIEW I've read to chapter 789 at ridiculous expense. Mostly because the story has the elements I love. PROS: Include great internal magical structure, detailed world building,vast and varied but interesting creatures (in this case tamed beasts), and likable characters amongst others.in addition the plot has maintained pace for all 789 chapters. CONS: There are 2 major cons that can drive a dedicated reader insane with aggravation. The 2 major problems seem to be poor translation skills. 1. Massive pronoun abuse. I recall one sentence that had a total of six he/she's in it. This was compunded by the severe mistakes with pronoun genders.It's so bad beware flare-ups of any gender dysphoria reader may have. 2. The writer constanly changes names of characters within the story. one character (the vacum had 7+8 different names). The writer also used the wrong name for characters enough to be notable and disruptive. 3. Towards the later chapters there was an apparent increase in repeating things almost ad nauseum for what I can only believe was padding the word count for profit. Given all the flaws I still enjoy the novel and recommend it with 2.5-3 stars out of 5, withe caveat that you can handle the seriou problems that directly affect the reading experience.
The author seems to be using some tricks to pad his profits by needlessly repeating in ad nauseam detail things he's already relayed, not just prior chapters but also within the same chapter. This is the third fatal flaw of this potentially great novel.
It's like a Google AI translation was used and not a thinking being. greatly dtracts from a great story.
"The Qingji Beauty has been bred by our Luminous Snake Clan, we have about twenty."
Crazy! Are You Really A Beast Tamer?
Eastern · Agate Honey Dew
come on. ANOTHER name for the vacum? Does this thing have multiple personalities? Stick to XiXi, it's the cutest name that reads the smoothest. For gods-of-all-dominions sake hire someone to correct the pronouns. I'm personally developing gender dysporia just from this novel.
Then, he would need to bring Snakey to the breeding facilities for Earth Attribute Guardian Beasts and clean up some earth element infused garbage.
Crazy! Are You Really A Beast Tamer?
Eastern · Agate Honey Dew
he's adding another completely different type to his beasts (which needs at least a second beast), when he still hasnt contracted greenwood, the lotus,( plus the cicada and frog, and most importantly the BUNNY
Yes. miao was the dude from starwheel. this is either a writing app mistake or a translator typing mistake. either way very sloppy editing takes a 5 star book down to 3 stars coupled with the constant pronoun confusion.
At the moment, Shui Miao was showing signs of evolving towards Perfect Quality.
Crazy! Are You Really A Beast Tamer?
Eastern · Agate Honey Dew
finally the shadow is getting some love. miss the bunny though
I'm not much for this genre of fiction but I must give 2 thumbs up for the quality of the writing. I've just read this to complete my 10 minute task for the day and very impressed with the author's writing skill. conversations are well done. characters are likable. if this is a translated into English work, then the translation was superb. i hope the author turns to some xianxia or western fantasy in the future.
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