It means, that Elohim could not be in the main focus of the plot for a few chapters. —Someone else could be the "main-character" for a few chapters.
I wouldn't really call it romance… but yes, there will be "love"…
I really hope that it will be better this time xD Your thoughts on this chapter?
I will actually change his personality a bit — not to a great extent… but still a bit. Most people will clearly not like Elohim's personality when he interacts with a certain Spirit… Let's just say he still cares about people… but in a different way. Perhaps… do you know Chainsaw man? Yeah, Elohim's personality will be a bit like Makima's from Chainsaw man as that personality fits his goals<— which I don't want to spoiler. And I actually planned to make such a scene where he tells the AST: "I am a Spirit" <— Elohim said while smiling calmly. But such scene will appear a bit later…
Damn your ideas are good! Makes me want to rewrite the fanfiction xD I never intended to use the Holy Grail because it actually has its own will and it is EVIL. Yeah, I thought about the whole concept about his illness and I think I will remove it — It will come a bit later in the story. I think many people wouldn't accept that Elohim could change the mind of the Spirit of origin <SPOILER> after she killed a few thousand girl just to revive him but yeah…… let's just say I planned something else with her……… something with her Sephiroth tree. The whole Senpai thing will also be a bit different. ——AND Elohim actually isn't the King of Despair —Elohim just looks like him. But maybe it is my fault because I made a mistake and it sounded wrong at the end…
I'm honestly excited to read your comments to the 'new' first chapter because the beginning is going to answer your questions—or probably just going to make you more confused. But I will try to make Elohim the main character for a certain reason. —BUT Shidou will still be there and have his moments. I honestly just call Elohim here a beta-character because there will be moments where he does nothing… —Maybe Hime will do a few things for him instead of doing something himself…(<--you don't have to understand that…yet) I love your idea about the whole Qliphoth Tree — I have a (similar) idea (in mind) and let's just say he maybe will have his own Qliphoth tree… but in a different way. ——And you can't believe how happy it makes that you still remember this fanfiction and the whole death match thing.
Got it. I will try my best~
I will try to make him "normal" but it is really hard for me because so many different characters exist besides him and I can't just ignore them —I actually can but I don't want to…
Yes. Sometimes, Elohim's character could be less relevant than Shidou's (or someone else) at some point. It will feel like Elohim is just an inserted character into the story of Date a live.
Nah kinda cringe
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