Sean_Olsen

Sean_Olsen

male LV 15

Always enjoy a good story with great world building

2020-05-16 加入 United States
徽章 29

Moments 5
Sean_Olsen
Sean_Olsen
4 months ago
Posted

Overall story has great potential to develop but is constantly jumping around and not always coherent. Would be great if the skill tree didn’t take up half the chapter instead of showing all just show current stats that arent zero with a show for updates. Would love to see this organized better with a better overall story flow

Sean_Olsen
Sean_Olsen
11 months ago
Commented

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Sean_Olsen
Sean_Olsen
2 years ago
Commented

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Behind him, Game Master Gerald Justice turned off his energy saber and returned it on his hip holster. (A/N: Bring on the starwars GIFs lol)

Speed Is King

Speed Is King

Fantasy · mrant12

Sean_Olsen
Sean_Olsen
2 years ago
Commented

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

Sean_Olsen
Sean_Olsen
3 years ago
Commented

See this! I just gifted the story: Massage chair