Thank you for the review! :D
Got it, will work more on the content of the characters. Thanks for the review!
Thank you for the positive review! :D
In my opinion the start is very basic, but that doesn't mean that it's bad! I like the storytelling, the style of your writing is just- it feels unique somehow. Regardless, I would recommend reading this and this review will also be updated once I have read more!
After reading the first few chapters, the writing is very detailed; the description of the explosions and thunders are a little extreme, but other than that, a fantastic start! Highly recommend checking out this book. This review will be updated once I have caught up [img=recommend]
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I am genuinely captivated by the plot of this story. The palace backdrop (which I like) as I've always had a liking to these themes, starting off with invasion really hooked me and I think will hook a lot of people. The dialogues in particular are exceptionally well-crafted, I feel like it connects you to the characters. Highly recommend this story! [img=recommend]
Flint is a really interesting character and the plot is full of unexpected twists that kept me on edge. Anyone that enjoys adventure with a drizzle of magic will love this, me included. Good work!
An interesting mix of Sci-Fi and Fantasy? Nonetheless, the beginning was very smooth. I can see a lot of people that would easily love this story lol. Grammar is great, and storytelling is very strong.
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original High School of the Elites
The night that was meant to be a peaceful time, turned into ruthless violence. What went down? And how did the tables turn for the worst that night? This and along with much more to come in the High School of the Elites! This story is on pause as of 9/30/2023.0 Chs 3 收藏
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