The story is simple but interesting. I find the grammar and choice of words very poor. The writer must read and re read the texts clearly so she could correct the wrong spelling and grammar. Thanks
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The story looks good even the main characters but the grammar is bad, I’m sorry to say.
That’s it? The end ?
Amazing story line. Love it
The story line is Getting better in every chapter. Interesting!
I don’t want to be rude but I find the english translations Very poor in grammar. Some words doesn’t make sense at all. Please improve your grammar. Thanks. I can help proofread your manuscripts if you need help. I was an editor and a proofreader in a publIshing company that published textbooks and magazines.
Is this the beginning for their live to flourIsh? I hop…
I love this book, TangNing is very smart and articulate I love the way she thinks, always above the others. Don’t provoke her you’ll never know when she’s gonna strike and how .... always looking forward for the next chapter and the next and the next.....
Ha ha ha good for the evil mom-in-law.
Interesting plot, can’t wait for more….
The Carrero Series (1-3)
Urban · L.T.Marshall