am feeling excited and worried at the same time...even bitting my nails... I want this satan and the devils to die, and I know Good will always prevail, but at the cost of millions of sacrifices.... am already crying here for the loses since the start of the war... and now here comes the final battle.... it hurts to say thisin war there's no real victory only loses on both sides.... 😢😢😢
😅😅😅😅 father-in-law of the War God that is indeed shocking for Shen Yu...
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the story is ok so far.... the only problem I see is that, the way is was written is too "messy" for me... I mean, the transitions of the plot confuses me... as to whether who is talking.... and where are they at that point in time.... scenes would suddenly change as fast as it could, I could hardly imagine anything.... I have to reread the paragraphs to try and understand what's going on... just like in this chapter... she just entered the door and she shouted... I think the author should first explain that she heard something from the kitchen knowing that her father was not yet home...that sort of thing...that made her scream before her father appeared before her and said he is sorry to scare her...
🤣🤣🤣 soon they will be more shock when xiu enters xiao xiao's body... and learn that xiu has been with her all along.
I was wondering when they would arrive... and then the last paragraph answered my wondering mind 😉😉😉
I feel happy and sad at the same time for them.... 😌😌😌
I felt their grief and tears rolled down my cheeks.... it is as if am one of the crowd who suddenly felt admiration towards them... (good job author, you really brought out some feelings from the readers, at least for me, I felt it, keep up the good work)
hahahahahahaha... Shen yanxiao... this is the result .of you running away... ask help from xiu he is the one who commanded you to go alone... 😂😂😂😂
wow... if a guy confessed to me like that... i would be very touched... although because of her past, she is doubtful... but overtime i hope she will be able to see and feel the sincerity of Yuyu's love... and i know deep inside... although very deeply hidden, she still love him.
The Big Boss & His Dainty Wife
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