so wasteful, he could just clean it or at least clean it an donate it to a charity house
Su Li followed him in a daze, but after exiting the office, she heard him instruct his secretary, "Throw out the coffee table from my office."
Contract Marriage: Mr.CEO and His Rebellious Wife
General · Su Qiaoran
so I dont get why in shape shifter werewolf novels, they are such extra petty humans? Wild wolves aren't petty or mean spirited so the shape shifters should be less petty than non wolf humans, right? in wild wolf packs, the alpha wolf is more like the father of the pack and doesn't bully or force but leads with wisdom and compassion and the wolves choose to follow him and the Alpha female. Soooo not sure why the alpha in Lucan novels is often a jerk, and the majority of the relationships are a bit toxic. It isn't romantic to marry someone you don't like and then treat them abusive. I get you write him how you like him, and this is just my opinion, but an alpha personality can take charge, lead people, and get things done without being a domineering jerk.
1st sentence kind of difficult or awkward to read. especially at this spot " ..was breathing raggedly when she could feel the pleasure she rode mixed with the pain.." suggestion: use active verbs instead.. 'she breathed raggedly as her pleasure mixed with the pain...' I know so rude to offer a rewrite, but only did this because a confusing 1st line could scare off your readers.😅
Zuri was breathing raggedly when she could feel the pleasure she rode mixed with the pain from the mark on her neck. She gasped and moaned at the same time, all the while trying to endure the pain that kept twisting her insides, as Alpha Xaden's canines dug deeper into her flesh.
A Mate For The Last Lycan
Fantasy · i_want_to_sleep
"Zurich was not a fool to not notice." kind of a double negative again yanking me out of the story spell to think that your saying Zurich knew about the maid's crappy attitudes. I am seriously wondering if you want readers to stumble out of your story with your phrases.
Both of them, like the rest of the omegas, didn't like this luna and Zuri was not a fool to not notice that.
A Mate For The Last Lycan
Fantasy · i_want_to_sleep
ouch a double negative! Do you not dislike us author?😉 I am teasing clearly, but seriously, do you like us enough ? 🤔 please help us poor readers dear author.
Zuri could only grit her teeth and accept her fate. This was expected, the pain was not something that she had never heard of, but this was beyond anything that she had ever felt.
A Mate For The Last Lycan
Fantasy · i_want_to_sleep
all men are perverts in nieve girlie eyes. so please explain
He Yinru leaned in closer, gave Su Qin a knowing look, and whispered, "He's a pervert. Su Li marrying him will only be happy for a while; sooner or later, she'll have her day of tears."
Contract Marriage: Mr.CEO and His Rebellious Wife
General · Su Qiaoran
yep. I thought she would. slap slap 😳 slap.
Su Qin sat opposite them, her face wearing an appropriate smile, but inside she was seething with resentment.
Contract Marriage: Mr.CEO and His Rebellious Wife
General · Su Qiaoran
Ahha now step sister will be jealous. slap slap in her face
Su Li led him inside. Su Qin, who had just been standing by the window, came over. Her eyes lit up when she saw Wei Chengfeng, then she turned and asked softly, "Sister, who is this?"
Contract Marriage: Mr.CEO and His Rebellious Wife
General · Su Qiaoran
😅😂
Could it be a clash of magnetic fields?
Contract Marriage: Mr.CEO and His Rebellious Wife
General · Su Qiaoran
Do you mean Su Li clutched her hem, not some new person, Bai Yiran? As I'm sure no one else is in the car with them
"I'm also not interested in your heart. Since you demand my person to be clean, can you guarantee that you yourself are clean? Because I too am particular about cleanliness."
Contract Marriage: Mr.CEO and His Rebellious Wife
General · Su Qiaoran