Deen_Ace_

male LV 4

love reading

2019-11-19 加入 Nepal
徽章 11

Moments 17
Deen_Ace_
Deen_Ace_
8 months ago
Posted

Your progression and story telling is way to rushed and crude.the way you started the story was nice but your follow through doesn't feel worth it at all....

Deen_Ace_
Deen_Ace_
1 years ago
Commented

hey dude do you have problems with addressing gender or wot???You call boy she/her n girl he/him... like seriously wtf??

Deen_Ace_
Deen_Ace_
1 years ago
Posted

Beautiful story.. .Addictive and completely worth reading

Deen_Ace_
Deen_Ace_
1 years ago
Commented

Completely worth reading. .. beautiful story

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Deen_Ace_
Deen_Ace_
2 years ago
Commented

enjoy my foot you lazy bum

Deen_Ace_
Deen_Ace_
2 years ago
Commented

nice day my foot .....more chapters fast

Deen_Ace_
Deen_Ace_
3 years ago
Commented

Nah.. I'll pass the new cover looks lame

Deen_Ace_
Deen_Ace_
3 years ago
Commented

you hardly release single chapter a day and still asking shamelessly for votes....

Deen_Ace_
Deen_Ace_
3 years ago
Commented

fix your grammar dude .... seriously man u mix the genders half of your writing doesn't make any sense..

Deen_Ace_
Deen_Ace_
3 years ago
Commented

Man u r calling a guy she and a girl he...hard to understand whom u r refering to with ur way of adding multiple names in a conversation