Vanbun

Vanbun

female LV 14

“The only thing that is beautiful as it disappears is the sun.The only thing that is beautiful to lose is in love.”-hospital ship

2019-11-02 加入 United States
徽章 71

Moments 1299
Vanbun
Vanbun
16 days ago
Commented

Clearly Ouyang tan like Qiao Fei for a long time… probably even when she was his friend’s fiancé. Feel like it’s somewhat messed up then again Tan probably never did like her

Vanbun
Vanbun
20 days ago
Commented

Why does he like her so much? And miss Qiao definitely know him and his preference

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Vanbun
23 days ago
Commented

So confusing… what does he want? So much misunderstanding that’s it a bit annoying.

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Vanbun
24 days ago
Commented

Good job author! Story is interesting so far and I wish there more to continue reading! Please update more often! :)

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Vanbun
1 years ago
Commented

Felt like it hasn’t end… it seem like it’s missing something still

Vanbun
Vanbun
1 years ago
Commented

This couple move fast! why does it feel like the author is just trying to wrap up everything and not rrally going into detail…

Vanbun
Vanbun
2 years ago
Commented

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

Vanbun
Vanbun
2 years ago
Posted

Another unfinish story that said complete…. Will they ever complete this comic

Vanbun
Vanbun
2 years ago
Commented

Lol he gave a a definition

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Vanbun
2 years ago
Posted

The story started out very interesting and it kept me hook for while then I kinda drop it cuz the FL and ML is lacking too much communication and it was just the same problem over and over. Eventually the story start developing and you do see the growth of the chacrcter but it was still lacking. The story got stretch out so much that there was no actual complete/ consequences of the problem that the character was dealing with. for instance; 1.what happen to Gu Jingze’s dad after he return to the family? What did he start doing? Or when he suddenly start missing and Gu jingze went to go look for him and return without him? 2.how did the couple deal with xue mengqi after the incident? 3. All the other couple need more story development and how their feeling started to grow 4. Why did they yun family hated the Gu family so much that they plot from so early on yet they want their daughter to married into the Gu family? That doesn’ make sense 5. How did Lin Che’s mother even end up with the Lin family? And when she came back she didn’t even go visit her mother til her funeral. Overall it was interesting but story development is lacking.. the ending felt so rush with a few chapters of each couple and not the overall ending.