CompleteNoob

CompleteNoob

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2019-10-12 加入 United Kingdom
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CompleteNoob
CompleteNoob
4 years ago
Replied to Infamous_Fitz

Okay, first of all. Who cares if I like Issei x Rias... Anyway, allow me to explain a few things: 1) This is a novel focusing on the MC and his heroines, so who knows what happened during the times the MC is not around Issei and Rias. (Mind you, with the MC in that world it's bound to be far more different) 2) the MC and Rias are childhood friends, although I'm not certain why your bothered over this but Anyway. when the MC stepped in due to anger about the engagement of Rias and Issei is political reason. political reason being due to gossips about people questioning the Gremory and Phenex head about their mentality, how this choice they made is far from being worth for a family head to make (Considering Risers reputation back then) this would influence businesses owned by them and their allies. And Masaru naturally has links with them, so in order to prevent that, he stepped in while using it as a excuse to help a friend. Remember Issei got Rias attention because he "sacrificed" something where as the MC did not which is also another factor. Well to put a conclusion, this is a novel and not reality, so naturally MANY things are possible to happen when the Author does not "write" about certain things. isn't this the loophole everyone uses to write FanFictions? In my case, it's the relationship between Rias and Issei since I did not bother about it. I left blanks for the readers discretion to imagine lol

CompleteNoob
CompleteNoob
4 years ago
Replied to Crimson_King

Thanks for the suggestion, I appreciate it

"There is another thing you girls have to understand, and it's the most important thing Masaru CAN'T know," Diana said while looking at the girls with a teasing smile, "The spellbook, the one who hosts it. Is the true first wife"

How to survive in the World DxD with Fragment Memories

How to survive in the World DxD with Fragment Memories

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CompleteNoob
CompleteNoob
4 years ago
Replied to KuroganeOfBaothien

Will try to do that today. Had a hectic week and even worked yesterday overtime hehe. Stay tuned

CompleteNoob
CompleteNoob
4 years ago
Replied to CompleteNoob

User: Kenrio Review: I love all your fanfic but I'm giving you one star because of the pathetic god title you give masaru 'wonder child' I become extremely disappointed in this story and lost all my enthusiasm I am only wanting that you end this faster now for you continue the other fics Response: 1 Star just for the God Title? ... Really?

CompleteNoob
CompleteNoob
4 years ago
Replied to Asc3ns10n

I don't remember the chapter but it was during the monster defensive war in Bael Territory where Masaru gave the sword spirit the name Drago and the sword itself was named Deadheart. Drago Deadheart

"But you gave him Hrunting! It was a Demonic Dragon Slaying sword which we held on for so long in hopes to find a perfect wielder for it" Edward looked at the elder who raised an objection.

How to survive in the World DxD with Fragment Memories

How to survive in the World DxD with Fragment Memories

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CompleteNoob
CompleteNoob
4 years ago
Replied to DaoistLadyKiller

Because I admit compared to other novels, mine still need to improve even more. Hehe, I'm a noob after all. Thanks for your support though, I appreciate it ^^

CompleteNoob
CompleteNoob
4 years ago
Replied to JockerMans

Shuri? No Venelana? No Misla? No Grayfia? No Griselda? No Gabriel? No Lady Sitri? No Lady Phenex? No Reason? #1 This is not a Netori Novel, so I will not destroy marraiges just because of a wish fulfillment. -.- (Please note: The MC did not steal any girls since he already had them before the canon mc. So it's not classified as NTR) #2 - Gabriel is simply impossible, her personality especially makes it impossible to become a member. Unless I change it drastically like some fanfictions, which I will not do. Too much of a hassle. #3 - Griselda? The MC is not Diodora, he does not have a Nun Fetish lol

CompleteNoob
CompleteNoob
4 years ago
Replied to ArgosYesu

Thanks for the review, I appreciate your honest and detailed opinion. Just want to mention that although there are parts where things appear "rushed" but do know that there is quite a lot of instances of Canon where the MC was not involved and many things could happen, especially with butterfly effect (Not going to write such chapters since I intend to focus on the MC as much as possible) As for Ravel? (It's complicated -.- I will have to reread my own book to see what I intended but) Yeah, I probably ended up leaving "blanks" where I no longer focused on Canon where "something" happened. (**: When I get time to reread I will come to answer this part again maybe?) Sona, now this is the billion dollar question and the answer for this is definitely in the book. It should give you a nice surprise ^^

CompleteNoob
CompleteNoob
4 years ago
Replied to NamelessPersona

Canon starts at Volume 3/4, kinda forgot since I just woke up lol

The thought of "training" that came in Akeno's mind was a secret she saw her mother whip Barakiel late at night, the pure bliss of both her parents faces surfaced as well causing her to blush.

How to survive in the World DxD with Fragment Memories

How to survive in the World DxD with Fragment Memories

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CompleteNoob
CompleteNoob
4 years ago
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Moving onto the next chapter. (Campione) It's been a while, everyone, I saw your comments (Although some I could not see since there were too many comments to read except for chapter comments) Thank you for your continued support, and I am striving to complete this book despite having several inspirations to start other books. It's really hard to resist the urge to write another book despite already writing one currently. Now then, we came this far. Masaru is finally displaying his interest to his memories he could not recall. This is only a subplot mixed with the vampire plot so it will not hold much significance. And now the shadows of Qlippoth has been displayed, for Masaru, they might not be a threat. But for civilizations they are a calamity, now let us see how things would go from this point forward. (Hopefully, my shifts would normalize next week, or I will cry....)

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  • How to survive in the World DxD with Fragment Memories original

    How to survive in the World DxD with Fragment Memories

    Anime & Comics ROMANCE R18 WEAKTOSTRONG HAREM DRAGON

    4.64

    Awaken in the world of DxD with broken memories related to it, yet having almost to no memories of his previous life other than his personality and ego remaining intact. Masaru discovered a day after his reincarnation or perhaps transmigration, that he turned out to be the son of Diehauser Belial, and that he was kidnapped the night his mother (Human) was killed by an assassin. With no other way but to play the fool in appearing to trust each and every person he met till he became strong enough to guard himself, Masaru starts to live as the chosen heir of the Belial Family. Using his fragmented memories of the World of DxD, Masaru takes the lead to take control of the flow of fate surrounding the world. To ensure the safety of himself, his beloved family... This is the story of a Wonder Child, who hates his title but can't resist creating miracles that can make one wonder.

    175 Chs 11.2k 收藏

  • How to Survive in the World of Campione with Fragmented Memories original

    How to Survive in the World of Campione with Fragmented Memories

    Anime & Comics ROMANCE MAGIC HAREM

    4.77

    A soul severed from his mail soul, was sent into the reincarnation cycle managed by Samsara herself. Was sent into the world of Campione with fragmented memories... Masaru, reborn alone in a new world was led on a journey facing off against heretical gods, a journey where he realized he once lived another life as a Devil but could not remember how he become one, what he did nor why he could not remember anything else other than being a devil... For the sake of surviving in a world where Gods and Goddesses kill off humans at a whim or Devil Kings who seek to control the world... How will Masaru survive Disclaimer: Do not own Campione or it's created characters. This is a Slow pace novel, it will only at times get in touch with Canon as it will mostly be about the MC moving about meeting other Devil Kings and Gods

    33 Chs 2.9k 收藏

  • How to Survive in The World of DBZ with Fragmented Memories original

    How to Survive in The World of DBZ with Fragmented Memories

    Anime & Comics ROMANCE HAREM

    4.71

    Masaru casts a Reincarnation spell upon himself and his wives to undergo the trials of Origin, but this process was interrupted by two mysterious powers that were clashing against one another for the rights to have Masaru become their host, their conflict caused the first intended world to change and they all ended up being born in a different world! Masaru Belial, reborn as Yozu Kayama, an orphan adopted by Dr Brief and Pancy. Yozu was brought up together with Bulma in hopes that he would inherit Dr Brief's legacy and his daughter would marry him and grant them a grandchild. Born with knowledge from his previous world about his two Longinus sacred gears, watch how Yozu a human with sacred gears take the top of the food chains as he transforms in inner Ki into Dragon Ki. It was only a year after Yozu slept with a woman he loved he became aware of his memories... He was once called Masaru Belial and his girls reincarnated along with him and it is up to him to find them all... ---------------- Disclaimer: Do Not Own Dragon Ball original creations or it's original characters. I only own my main character. Look forward to your support

    25 Chs 1.7k 收藏

  • How to survive in the World of Naruto with Fragmented Memories original

    How to survive in the World of Naruto with Fragmented Memories

    Anime & Comics ACTION ROMANCE R18 HAREM

    4.86

    After living long enough in the world of DBZ, Yozu aka Masaru Belial decides it was time to take the second phase of the trials, to survive in a new world. During the reincarnation spell his soul touches the boundaries of where Hagomo's soul rests and incidentally get influenced before returning to the cycle of rebirth as he went to the World of Naruto. Masaru Belial now called Yuuma (Otsutsuki / Kurama) Terumi, born in the land of fire escaped with his father and mother only to be left in an orphanage near the Village Hidden in the mist. Later had himself adopted by Terumi Family. Plotted to have him killed or sold off by many, Yuuma has to walk the path ahead to become the sole existence at the top. To make them acknowledge him, and to protect what he wants to. Many years later Yuuma came in touch with a peculiar girl that gave him a sense of familiarity and bit by bit fragmented memories of his past life as Masaru Belial and Yozu Brief came back to him. -------- Disclaimer: Don't own Naruto, and the picture I got from Google which was by luck it fitted my MC's looks! Trying my hand on making a naruto fanfiction

    51 Chs 2.3k 收藏