my tongue is bleeding 🤣
Back in the Black Bulls Base (A/N: Say that five times fast):
Strange use of Magic (Black Clover AU)
Anime & Comics · Shadow_D_Monarch3
when I said it was a bad copy someone already did a book like this I think it was exorcising of demons with the same system type book
you can never know who is speaking, not enough paragraphs plus somehow skip scenes i mean they are abrupt. You need a good editor and a proofreader, you can't do both. for instance I don't know where the boy who gave the MC a cure to his demon blood poison came from you never explained about who the other team he met in the cave are, and boy(the one with the cure)just kinda showed up we know why he is helping the MC and the testing arc has to be rewritten too many confusing parts when you get to the cave scenes but it is a good idea for a book tho it seems rushed in narration when comes to what is going on. well that's where i stopped reading.
horrible copy, horrible writing, too many errors in dialogue basically it's bad if i could give rating below 1 would
keikaku meaning cake or plan
The cake master Jason appears again.
SCPs in Marvel
Movies · Adam001
this chapter was mid, no Hisoka and Gon fight, no sushi scene or the egg you just skipped everything, very disappointed with you 😞🐼👎
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i don't see people rushing to go china, go easy on the rep-ing bruv
該書已被刪除。
🐼👍+1+1+1+1+1+1+1+1+1+1+1+1+1+1+1+1+1+1+1+1+1+1+1+1+1+1+1 Good stuff so far
no problem I sincerely would love to read this again after the corrections good luck bro and happy new year bruv 🐼👍
Reincarnated As An Extra! Obtaining Tenfold Increments.
Fantasy · Riler3