That recipe....pfft haha! I didn't write the whole ingredient! I'm sorry.
Hah? What?
First chap and it already has a goal. Very impressive.
FINALLY> I have read all of your recent chapters. You thought I abandoned your story? HAHAHAHAHA nope! I'll keep on reading. Well the names were so damn creative because it's based from their three lives. Writing quality is great. World background is great. The MC is mysterious as hecc and I love it!
THIS MAKES MY NOSE BLEED!!! In other words, this have a great MC.[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
Ok. There was originality and creativeness. Grammar seems a bit wrong on some cases. Characters are presented and described as the story goes on and I liked that. All in all your story is about to create a great future. Just don't stop till you finish it. That's all I could say basing from my level of criticism.
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original Sate My Soul
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"I only wanted to protect him and his free will... I had a chance to guide him and save him, but I did not do so, for I respect his free will. My obsession led him to ruin. The only way I can make up for my mistakes... is to take what's rightfully his..."1 Chs 5 收藏
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World of Reincarnations
Vikhail was killed by two mysterious murderers. He wakes up in a world full of worlds. Read as Vikhail creates history of each world he will go in.7 Chs 5 收藏
Glad I came back... Your storytelling when it comes to sad endings is top-notch! [img=recommend]
A week of tears
Teen · Snowbear_chan