WHAT_NO_MONEY

WHAT_NO_MONEY

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well respected bike repairman.

2019-05-11 加入 Netherlands
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WHAT_NO_MONEY
WHAT_NO_MONEY
1 days ago
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Much better than your average football story on this site. The MC is a manager, that is given a system and needs to take over a struggling but somewhat decent Roma side. There isn't many chapters yet, but stylistically it has potential. The interactions between characters feel alot more realistic than most novels in this category, my only gripe would be finding the right balance on how to pace the novel. Certain scenes make me wonder if they really needed to drag on as much as they did, but that may just be my personal preference. Otherwise keep up the good work.

WHAT_NO_MONEY
WHAT_NO_MONEY
1 days ago
Commented

Could also buy a low pyramid team and get them quickly up the pyramid before selling them off for profit.

WHAT_NO_MONEY
WHAT_NO_MONEY
1 days ago
Commented

Could recommend players to Jorge and try and get a cut. Would also help if Jorge had more world class talents signed so that when he found a club he would have more options. Also would improve his relationship with the players even if he doesn't sign them to Roma. Could only be a good thing. Could also go to some event and be approached by some start-up company that needs funding and in the future they could do well. The best way to earn money would be to capitalise on his ability to identify which players have high potential ceilings.

WHAT_NO_MONEY
WHAT_NO_MONEY
1 days ago
Replied to Worn_out_by

If they start fresh in another galaxy with improvements in ftl and communications as well as not having to manage a cripplingly large galaxy spanning empire, they could do quite well. Even the religion isn't that much of a detriment its more the effect it has on science and that it enables influential people to use it as a means of enabling their own corruption.

"When the time comes, and the Imperium of Man brings the Emperor's light to this galaxy, you will leave this corrupt Republic behind. You will have the honor of becoming the first Imperial world."

Space Marine in Star Wars (Warhammer X Star Wars)

Space Marine in Star Wars (Warhammer X Star Wars)

Movies · Greenbaypitbull

WHAT_NO_MONEY
WHAT_NO_MONEY
1 days ago
Replied to cheeki_breeki

In general yes. But for a space marine, they'd probably see it more than you'd think. Especially during a serious Tyranid incursion.

"Let me offer you a second option," he said, his voice low but commanding. "I have burned hundreds of worlds to ash. I have fought countless wars. I have slain thousands with my bare hands. One army of automata is nothing to my brothers and I. We have a weapon. A weapon I will personally use to cleanse your world of the filth that dares to desecrate it. But I ask for one thing in return."

Space Marine in Star Wars (Warhammer X Star Wars)

Space Marine in Star Wars (Warhammer X Star Wars)

Movies · Greenbaypitbull

WHAT_NO_MONEY
WHAT_NO_MONEY
1 days ago
Commented

Whats left of it jejejeje

WHAT_NO_MONEY
WHAT_NO_MONEY
1 days ago
Commented

lmao

Maximus clenched his fists, turning his gaze back to the Gungan. "Enough. I'll speak no more of this. Leave it behind, or I'll rip its skull off its shoulders." His tone was cold, the threat unmistakable.

Space Marine in Star Wars (Warhammer X Star Wars)

Space Marine in Star Wars (Warhammer X Star Wars)

Movies · Greenbaypitbull

WHAT_NO_MONEY
WHAT_NO_MONEY
1 days ago
Replied to Ichigo_Kurosaki_1799

Not surprising with what they have to deal with, not exactly conducive to a peaceful civilisation.

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WHAT_NO_MONEY
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