I think "suffice it say" should be "suffice it to say" ("it" isn't mandatory but "to" is in this idiom).
"Luna" instead of "Lune". First mistake spotted after 15 chapters, well done on the proofreading! ^^
I don't know if Webnovel is being buggy but I don't see anything different on my end ^^
"but than" should be "but then" :)
"Erik than smiled" should be "Erik then smiled" :)
"she doesn't seem to know about a lot about fairies" => the first "about" should be deleted ^^
"then" instead of "than" :p
"Erik resisted and stayed in place" instead of "Erik resisted stayed in place" :)
"then we simply have to" instead of "than" ^^
"interest" instead of "interesting" :)
Dreadwolf, Lord of Runes
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