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10 days ago
Replied to _Arthas_

I'll take that into account, but I still stick by my earlier point. Maybe earlier in the war it's like what you said, but later, there was a supreme tribunal headed by Barty Crouch that had maximum authority. That's why the death eaters who pleaded imperius had to bribe and blackmail others for support to get out of the charges. Plus there was the fact that no one knew who did what or even who all the death eaters were because of masks. That's why Igor Karkaroff was so hated as he turned traitor. I do agree when you said that all revolutions leave behind people of the old regimes, so it's probably as you say, too costly in both manpower and financial resources to wipe them out. Honestly, I'm not very interested in politics not am I versed in it. I understand things generally, but not the minutiae. I'll have a shot in this novel at some point, but it'll probably seem simplistic to those readers who are more knowledgable than me.

The first is that the government simply doesn't have the resources to allocate someone to take care of the kids of the death eaters at this time. The second reason is that despite magical contracts existing, neither of my parents would ever trust someone else to take care of me. Lucius' friends and aquaintances aren't what you would call good people. Magical contracts aren't absolute and he has too many enemies.

Harry Potter FF: The Power Of The Soul

Harry Potter FF: The Power Of The Soul

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10 days ago
Replied to scyfly

I'm not on fanfic.net, I've only posted the story here. Plus, I don't have a patreon or similar so I never bothered to post on multiple platforms.

My latest project is actually related to this. I've read many fanfictions of Harry Potter where when the protagonist learns occlumency, they make their mind a computer and this has profound benefits for them.

Harry Potter FF: The Power Of The Soul

Harry Potter FF: The Power Of The Soul

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10 days ago
Replied to scyfly

I put twittered in purposely. Tittered just isn't as annoying and twittered is a real word. The other things you've commented on have been spelling mistakes.

"I enjoy fashion. I love what everyone has done tonight. Did you see Lady Malfoy? What about Lord and Lady Greengrass! They are so stunning! You as well Daphne, but you're not as pretty as you mother yet hahahaha." Twittered Pansy annoyingly.

Harry Potter FF: The Power Of The Soul

Harry Potter FF: The Power Of The Soul

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11 days ago
Replied to ElG0hary

Conspriacy!!!

I smiled widely. "Oh but is Daphne. The muggles figured it out. They built a ship that took them 380 000 kilometres out there, all the way to the moon. There was a television broadcast worldwide and 600 to 700 million people watched as Niel Armstrong became the first person to walk on the moon." I spoke rapturously.

Harry Potter FF: The Power Of The Soul

Harry Potter FF: The Power Of The Soul

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11 days ago
Replied to ExoticSenta

No, I looked this one up on the HP wiki. He was friends with Lucius, but there is no indication whatsoever that he was his godfather. That's something from fanfiction.

I sighed. "Many things Daphne. I've looked into this. A lot of the teachers are properly qualified masters in their fields, no doubt about that. There are exceptions however. For instance, ever since Severus Snape took the position of potions master, there has been a decline of over 90% of students graduating with potions NEWT's. He's definitely qualified, but his teachings are clearly shit." I said.

Harry Potter FF: The Power Of The Soul

Harry Potter FF: The Power Of The Soul

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11 days ago
Replied to _Arthas_

I disagree. The country was in a time of war. The ministry had supreme power, no matter what kind of power the families held it could all be taken away and redistributed by the government. That's why they had to make backroom deals to get off with the imperius excuse through bribes, blackmail, threats etc.

The first is that the government simply doesn't have the resources to allocate someone to take care of the kids of the death eaters at this time. The second reason is that despite magical contracts existing, neither of my parents would ever trust someone else to take care of me. Lucius' friends and aquaintances aren't what you would call good people. Magical contracts aren't absolute and he has too many enemies.

Harry Potter FF: The Power Of The Soul

Harry Potter FF: The Power Of The Soul

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11 days ago
Replied to Maple

That's true. I don't spend time around children and don't know how they think, so I would have never thought of this. Thanks for pointing it out.

Like yeah Harry spent the year being enamoured with having friends, magic is real, Hogwarts! I get it. But then at the end of the year he learned that Voledemort was still alive and trying to kill him. And so does he realise that he needs to learn more in order to survive? No! He continues coasting through. *Sigh*

Harry Potter FF: The Power Of The Soul

Harry Potter FF: The Power Of The Soul

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11 days ago
Replied to _Arthas_

Thanks for the review! I will continue to try to improve. And hey, at least I gave warnings in the description. Have a good one :)

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12 days ago
Replied to g77471164

You're right. I could go and retcon it and be like 'because of magic the MC was more developed at birth' but honestly, I just forgot.

She couldn't stop the smile that came to her face, nor did she want to. He immediately stopped crying as soon as he was put into her arms, and she stared at the pale blue eyes characteristic to all newborns.

Harry Potter FF: The Power Of The Soul

Harry Potter FF: The Power Of The Soul

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  • Harry Potter FF: The Power Of The Soul original

    Harry Potter FF: The Power Of The Soul

    Book&Literature REINCARNATION MAGIC OVERPOWERED CULTIVATION HARRYPOTTER

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    What do you do when you find yourself in one of your favourite universes after death? Or how about being born as one of the main antagonists? Do you freak out about how the character you are now is destined to end? Do you make plans and plots about how to avoid it? Or maybe you play along with the plot until the critical moment? None of the above, that's what. I've been given a chance for an entirely new life in a fantasy world, who cares about the plot? I'll just do my own thing. It's my life now. MC is a guy who reincarnates into an AU HP world as Draco Malfoy. He won't be interacting much with Harry directly but there will be interaction. No Wishes, ROB, etc, etc. There are cultivation elements in it, hence the tag, but MC isn't a cultivator. This story is a magic based story, that's why it's an HP fanfic, not a cultivation novel. If you don't like it, don't read it. 3 things before readers start reading: 1: This story will have cultivation stuff in it. No 'magic cultivation' but it has a Soul Cultivation Technique. It's the gimmick of this story. I personally really enjoy the POWER SYSTEM of the cultivation genre. However I really, really, REALLY hate the genre itself. Out of all I've read, I only enjoy a rare few novels and everything else is just young masters, jade beauties, "YOU DARE?" etc. If you've ever read one, you know what I mean. I am based in Australia and was raised here, so while the MC might have a soul cultivation technique and I might touch upon aspects of cultivation, the characters wont be behaving like in those novels. The MC won't be acting like a young master. Basically, this isn't a CN Novel. I don't know how else to explain it, but if you've ever read one you should understand. 2: Early chapters have a lot of info dump in them. It reads smoothly but some parts are full of infodump. I wanted to get the power system and how magic works in this story out of the way. Skim it as you please but skipping ahead may make you miss stuff. It's not ALL infodump. 3: This story isn't going to be a harem story. I thought about it and thought what's the point? It's been done so many times before that it gets old. Haven't decided on the pairing yet. A/N: I'm confident in my english and grammar, having always been pretty decent at it (It's my first language). My storytelling, character building, relationships, the plot etc. on the other hand, not so much. Criticism is welcomed, just don't be a ****. Update speed: No promises. This whole thing is being done casually. I might post a few chapters a day and then not post at all for months. I've had the first 5-10 chapters of this story written out for a few years now and kept tweaking and re-writing it over and over for a while now. I thought that posting it might motivate me to continue writing it. Save it or don't. This will be one of those stories you check after 6 months in your library after forgetting it was there. Disclaimer: I don't own this series. All rights belong to J.K. Rowling. Please support the official release. ***Update*** I have uploaded a cover for the book. It's some AI-generated pic I found on Google, but I like it. He's handsome in the pic, pretty close to what I envisioned. Also, I know AI stuff can't be copyrighted, but just in case. Disclaimer: The image used on the cover is not mine. I don't own the rights to it. Please support the official release... whoever that is.

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  • I Will Do What I Want! (Dropped) original

    I Will Do What I Want! (Dropped)

    Fantasy REINCARNATION

    Well, here I am. Not sure how things ended up like this, but here I am living my dream in a Magical World! It's Great! I got some OP magic as isekai protagonists generally do, but as with all things there has to be a balance, It is precisely this problem which is giving me headaches.... why, just why DID I HAVE TO BE ROBORN AS A GIRL! Ugh... my head hurts. Whatever. Heroes, Villians, out with them, who gives a shit anyway? I WILL DO WHAT I WANT IN THIS LIFE! (A/N: Don't know if I will do romance or not, there probably will be some elements of it later on, but this is not a romance novel at heart. Hey! WHY CANT THE GENRE JUST BE MAGIC FANTASY! NOT MAGICAL ROMANCE!)

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