No, I wrote it in my free time, but it was just for my entertainment that's why I didn't edit it.
He is an exception to the norm, for some reason he is the most humane primarch, while still having the strength and stamina of a true primarch. It will be explained later, I have several chapters to edit including this one that I published, there are some things that I have not edited yet, I just wanted to publish it to see what you thought, anyway the Mc will be the epitome of xenophobia
Orion stopped before a reflective metal surface and was struck with disbelief. His face… His face was impossible. His skin was pale as marble, flawless, and each feature seemed sculpted by gods. His eyes, burning gold, emitted a glow that defied the tunnel's gloom. Her Golden hair, reflecting a radiance that seemed to brighten even the desolation around him. His beauty was overwhelming, so much so that even in his confusion, he felt undeserving of such a visage. He was more beautiful than Sanguinius himself, and that thought unsettled him.
Book&Literature · ThomenV
"It seems it's just you and me left in this hall," Orión muttered, almost casually, as he looked down at the governor's lifeless body. He seated himself upon the throne, adorned with Imperial symbols, and added coldly, "Don't blame me for what will happen to your family. Blame yourself for being the architect of their tragic fate."
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On a normal planet under the empire, Eden would already be headless for heresy
heresy
In the future I may create a story about the man in the image, he will be the second Primarch and possibly will be located in the 41st millennium and for obvious reasons will be in the dark zone of the empire, in the Nihilus. Although it will be a long-term project, since it is difficult to write something coherent about WH40K.
I will take the advice, thank you very much, the good thing is that I will save money with the Primarch book since my brother bought it a long time ago
But his enemies were legion: the Four Gods of Chaos, the relentless Tyranids, the green-skinned Orks, shadowy heretics, and an endless tide of alien threats.
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Although, since we're in the world of Warhammer 40k, it's likely that sooner or later the planet will be invaded by Orks or Tyranids. The trick is to prepare them a grand welcome that they won't leave unscathed, Orion thought with resignation.
Warhammer 40k: Reborn as the second Primarch
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