I'm Turtle, an 18 year old from austria who loves reading and writing. Currently, I am writing "Forged in Shadows", a high-fantasy novel. Check it out!
2019-03-07 加入Austria
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TurtleWrites
1 years ago
Replied to HGB
Hi, thank you for your review :)I can definetly see where you're coming from, I am still struggling with that. It's my first book and I am quite unsure about what to say and what to leave out.Once again, thank you so much. It helps a lot :)-Turtle
A panting figure hid within the lush crown of the tall trees. The windy rustling of leaves drowned out his heavy breaths. The pears of sweat covering his body sparkled under the few sun rays. A damp, haggard cloak sticking to his skin veiled most of his youthful figure. 'Dammit, who are they?!' Orion cursed within his thoughts as he darted his view around.
A wild, shameless author appears, rating his novel the obligatory 5 stars.
I hope that, even though many flaws still plague my writing, the story I am trying to tell shines forth.
I would be glad you give me a chance, but it’s fine if you don’t. Either way, thank you for reading till this point.
- Turtle
Given the ultimatum of eradication or rebirth, would you seize the latter, even at the cost of bearing the universe's weight on your shoulders?
Drawn into a binding pact with an ancient tome, young Orion is thrown into the deep waters of the universe. Guided by an unyielding resolve and a compassionate heart, he delves into arcane mysteries, adversaries, and forges deep bonds along his path. As his journey unfolds, realms collide and destinies intertwine, leaving an everlasting mark on the cosmos. Step into a realm where the extraordinary becomes ordinary, and join Orion on an epic odyssey that will challenge all rules.
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Author here, this is my first time writing a novel but don't be gentle. If you have something you would like to say please do so. (It will hurt my feelings but that's okay lol)
- Turtle
Join the discord if you'd like to stay up to date, or just chat with other readers. (including myself)
https://discord.gg/gZBcg4wadZ
PS. I upload ~1500 words daily at 4 PM EST (10 PM CEST) but might be unable to because of school.
Hi, thank you for your review :)I can definetly see where you're coming from, I am still struggling with that. It's my first book and I am quite unsure about what to say and what to leave out.Once again, thank you so much. It helps a lot :)-Turtle
A panting figure hid within the lush crown of the tall trees. The windy rustling of leaves drowned out his heavy breaths. The pears of sweat covering his body sparkled under the few sun rays. A damp, haggard cloak sticking to his skin veiled most of his youthful figure. 'Dammit, who are they?!' Orion cursed within his thoughts as he darted his view around.
Forged in Shadows
Fantasy · TurtleWrites