Rasteli

Rasteli

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2019-02-10 加入 Global
徽章 7

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Rasteli
Rasteli
21 days ago
Commented

Just one thing, you hadn't introduced the ranking system and the launch of the Rankings was very abrupt. So I advise you to soften the introduction of the rankings, because it could become a little disconnected from the story.

Rasteli
Rasteli
1 months ago
Commented

O capítulo está desformatado, começo de frases em minusculo e continuação de frases se separando. Obs: Li o primeiro capítulo agora e não sei como será no futuro, mas vou tentar continuar lendo

Rasteli
Rasteli
Rasteli
3 years ago
Replied to Skyrust

I don't think he's from the future, because of the occlumency that gives an almost perfect memory, so he would miss the name of a teacher who taught him for 7 years (text translated by the translator).

Rasteli
Rasteli
4 years ago
Commented

O autor é brasileiro?

Rasteli
Rasteli
4 years ago
Replied to G00mba

when the story was on the original shelf and up to about 100, he was posting almost 5 chapters a day, but only now is one a day.

Rasteli
Rasteli
4 years ago
Replied to mousty

as far as i read it was over 1200 he just fell in love with one and there is no other girl the MC is interested in, and their relationship is very good.

Rasteli
Rasteli
4 years ago
Commented

A doubt. Is his request just about the formulas or the book of the Temporal Demon Spirit?

Rasteli
Rasteli
4 years ago
Commented

The word immortal is written as immoral. I’m just talking, because I’m using the translator to read it, then it’s wrong.

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Rasteli
Rasteli
4 years ago
Commented

almost every chapter has the word and world error. Yes, you can understand what it is, but if you translate through the browser it changes a lot.