徽章 12
Moments 40
Questionablemnm
Who’s chopping onions ?!
Questionablemnm
Jeez stop cutting onions! Cant even read … I’m gonna be dehydrated by the end of this. So sad yet so sweet
Questionablemnm
So exciting !! Cant wait to see what comes next!
Questionablemnm
Man every time I read this chapter someone always has to be chopping onions…
Questionablemnm
Love me some communication !!!
Questionablemnm
Omg I don’t get why you don’t have more comments !!!
Questionablemnm
3rd time reading and still I love the start of this story!!
Questionablemnm
Good chapter… not loving the slurs tho. Let’s keep fa**ot out of the vocab please
Questionablemnm
Heads up that you mentioned Taylor before introducing them… there’s some important info missing. Made reading this chap a little confusing
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I’m glad I read this! Really appreciate being straight to the point
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