Dennis_Dindayal

you're really starting to hit your stride as a writer. Some of the best and most entertaining stuff I've read! and I'm in an emotional funk, Dad is dying from cancer and I'm off to see him for the holidays... Speaking of Holiday's, have a Merry Christmas and Happy New Year.

the way you mixed in the reactions with the speech... probably your best chapter yet.

honestly I don't remember... going through an emotional crisis, My dad's dying and my uncle just died yesterday. So I honestly don't remember, sorry, I think the last chapter for sure but I don't remember about the others.

thanks, good that the protagonist was able to have a little innocent fun.

thanks for the update

just realized that you updated this story. For the most part I love it... But these chapters do need a little editing or grammarly at least.

thanks for the entertainment

thanks

good chapter, I'll have to drop off a stone tomorrow

thanks... I'm emotionally drained today and needed the distraction.