Deltora

Deltora

male LV 11

I found this app in November of 2018 and I absolutely love it.

2018-11-14 加入 United States
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徽章 13

Moments 96
Deltora
Deltora
2 years ago
Commented

Hi everyone, thank you all for the suggestion to restart. I honestly think that it might be the best choice since it doesn't have many chapters. If you have any suggestions on things that I could improve on or parts that could happen later on in the story then please comment then. I hope to provide you all with a much better story and hope that you will all enjoy what I put out in the future.

Deltora
Deltora
2 years ago
Replied to Ragar67

That's fair. I was writing a lot of these early chapters late at night and I didn't really storyboard before planning this out so I was just coming up each chapter as I went.

"So, you're telling us that you were brought here from another world where we only exist in the pages of comic books and you ran a comic bookstore with your dad. That's why you know everything about us and the others?"

My Comic book Harem

My Comic book Harem

Anime & Comics · Deltora

Deltora
Deltora
2 years ago
Replied to Ragar67

It's just his frame and the fact that he recognizes all these people but they dont recognize him. Plus, the only new faces have been the Marvel Universe.

"Hey Bats, we got a suspicious looking character down here at the gym. I've got some of the young ins down here and this guy is pretty big. He's roughly 6'5" with a large belly and scraggly beard. He's got glasses and looks a little out of sorts. I hired him on as the janitor so I can keep an eye on him. I'll see what Green Arrow is up to and have him investigate this guy.

My Comic book Harem

My Comic book Harem

Anime & Comics · Deltora

Deltora
Deltora
2 years ago
Replied to Reykskjar

Low level undead never give a lot of xp.

Deltora
Deltora
2 years ago
Replied to Waluigi_1

I'm thinking he might have some bruised ribs or something.

For the situps he placed his legs inside of a crack in a wall and did it normally. By far, it was the hardest for him, as he felt as if he was going to puke blood after completing each one.

Pause System: Harem In The Apocalypse

Pause System: Harem In The Apocalypse

Fantasy · Renovator

Deltora
Deltora
2 years ago
Replied to

But imagine how good your quads will look after.

In order to complete the 10 KM run, he ran up and down the stairs countless times. To facilitate the push-ups, he used the stairs to do them, doing 20 at a time. For the squats, he followed the same procedure.

Pause System: Harem In The Apocalypse

Pause System: Harem In The Apocalypse

Fantasy · Renovator

Deltora
Deltora
2 years ago
Replied to CoffeeAficionado

Catwoman sees the criminal life as moreso of being Batman's target and stealing stuff. Harley is just being her natural psychotic self.

"I've just been thinking about what to do next. You two have all but left the life of crime behind but I'm still stealing what I can and going where I please. Maybe I need to change something else in my life."

My Comic book Harem

My Comic book Harem

Anime & Comics · Deltora

Deltora
Deltora
3 years ago
Replied to Jason_Cannon

Definitely a possibility. I really want to write more but work is kinda crazy.

Deltora
Deltora
3 years ago
Replied to Gabichu_Yeah

Yeah, because there's so much time in between each chapter I forget a lot of the timeline. I want to write more but life keeps dragging me around.

Deltora
Deltora
3 years ago
Commented

Calm down Kratos.

Almost as if the bloodstains were a part of him now.

Reborn: Evolving From Nothing

Reborn: Evolving From Nothing

Fantasy · AuthorWiz

  • I Was Sent to Another World and All I Got Was a Stick original

    I Was Sent to Another World and All I Got Was a Stick

    Fantasy ACTION ADVENTURE HAREM ISEKAI

    Ian Grey was a little above average while those around him filled in the gaps. He, in his terms, was a decent athlete with alright grades. All this changed one day when he and a few classmates are sent to a different world. The classmates are all from different walks of life and don't usually associate with each other. However, Ian is their common ground and he knows things about them that could effect their lives forever. The group of high school seniors have been summoned to another world and have been gifted with weapons befitting their classes. However, how will Ian react when he gets a mere stick and doesn't even have a class? It's gonna be one wild ride.

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  • My Comic book Harem original

    My Comic book Harem

    Anime & Comics ACTION REINCARNATION R18 HAREM

    4.8

    Milton Graves grew up in his dad's comic book store and eventually took it over. After a fire burned his shop to the ground and smoked him out, Milton awoke to find himself in the middle of the street. Before he could even think, two beautiful women with emerald skin were fighting. He recognized as comic book characters, but they were from different companies. How is this possible?

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