That's fair. I was writing a lot of these early chapters late at night and I didn't really storyboard before planning this out so I was just coming up each chapter as I went.
"So, you're telling us that you were brought here from another world where we only exist in the pages of comic books and you ran a comic bookstore with your dad. That's why you know everything about us and the others?"
Anime & Comics · Deltora
It's just his frame and the fact that he recognizes all these people but they dont recognize him. Plus, the only new faces have been the Marvel Universe.
"Hey Bats, we got a suspicious looking character down here at the gym. I've got some of the young ins down here and this guy is pretty big. He's roughly 6'5" with a large belly and scraggly beard. He's got glasses and looks a little out of sorts. I hired him on as the janitor so I can keep an eye on him. I'll see what Green Arrow is up to and have him investigate this guy.
Anime & Comics · Deltora
Low level undead never give a lot of xp.
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Fantasy · Renovator
I'm thinking he might have some bruised ribs or something.
For the situps he placed his legs inside of a crack in a wall and did it normally. By far, it was the hardest for him, as he felt as if he was going to puke blood after completing each one.
Fantasy · Renovator
But imagine how good your quads will look after.
In order to complete the 10 KM run, he ran up and down the stairs countless times. To facilitate the push-ups, he used the stairs to do them, doing 20 at a time. For the squats, he followed the same procedure.
Fantasy · Renovator
Catwoman sees the criminal life as moreso of being Batman's target and stealing stuff. Harley is just being her natural psychotic self.
"I've just been thinking about what to do next. You two have all but left the life of crime behind but I'm still stealing what I can and going where I please. Maybe I need to change something else in my life."
Anime & Comics · Deltora
Definitely a possibility. I really want to write more but work is kinda crazy.
Yeah, because there's so much time in between each chapter I forget a lot of the timeline. I want to write more but life keeps dragging me around.
Calm down Kratos.
Almost as if the bloodstains were a part of him now.
Fantasy · AuthorWiz
Hi everyone, thank you all for the suggestion to restart. I honestly think that it might be the best choice since it doesn't have many chapters. If you have any suggestions on things that I could improve on or parts that could happen later on in the story then please comment then. I hope to provide you all with a much better story and hope that you will all enjoy what I put out in the future.
My Comic book Harem
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