JamesAnthony1999

JamesAnthony1999

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JamesAnthony1999
JamesAnthony1999
1 months ago
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After reading the end of chapter 31*

JamesAnthony1999
JamesAnthony1999
1 months ago
Commented

did his best to appear calm*

Though he felt weird and floaty with Rias so close to him, Vahn did his best to appear calm as he nodded, affirming, "I did," before producing a thin silver ring with a tiny red gemstone.

EPIC: Path of Demons and Dragons

EPIC: Path of Demons and Dragons

Anime & Comics · Einlion

JamesAnthony1999
JamesAnthony1999
1 months ago
Commented

With his loot* secured

With his look secured, Vahn turned his attention to his spear, whose blade resembled a vermillion flame with a red hue, a fiery orange edge, and the Kanji for Fire etched into the side in shimmering gold. Monsters within the Corridor of Intertwined Fates had a wide range of Elemental affinities and weaknesses, so to make things easier for himself, he had invested most of his OP toward acquiring spears of each Element to nourish his Legendary Spear.

EPIC: Path of Demons and Dragons

EPIC: Path of Demons and Dragons

Anime & Comics · Einlion

JamesAnthony1999
JamesAnthony1999
1 months ago
Commented

'and had even* met'

(Good night, Vahn...) said Sis, her voice gentle as Vahn's consciousness slowly slipped away. It was only 2:17 PM, but since he had been up since the previous evening and had never met and interacted with so many new and interesting people before, he was thoroughly exhausted. It wasn't like the usual exhaustion, though. It was soothing, pleasant even...

EPIC: Path of Demons and Dragons

EPIC: Path of Demons and Dragons

Anime & Comics · Einlion

JamesAnthony1999
JamesAnthony1999
1 months ago
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Enjoyed it quite a bit for the first 30 chapters. Quite a few spelling errors but it was still mostly readable. Some things such as quantity of ships built or the strength/speed of enhanced people or the quantity of money seems exaggerated and too unrealistic even with the AU changes to the world and characters. Just comparing what others have compared to what the MC and her faction has the difference is too large and exaggerated. After reading the ending of chapter 1 I decided to stop reading. Danny is my fav character and to know that nothing has changed for her even up to the point of her brothers death just bothers me. Thanks for the read so far but this is where I part with this story. Good luck author and I hope to read other stories of yours in the future.

JamesAnthony1999
JamesAnthony1999
2 months ago
Replied to Natkuchiro

13 I think

""Well you did promise me as many kids as Alysanne gave Jaehaerys so I expect you to keep your word."" She shakes her head with a small smile quirking up.

GOT/ASOIAF: Son of the Unworthy

GOT/ASOIAF: Son of the Unworthy

Book&Literature · Pretending_Author

JamesAnthony1999
JamesAnthony1999
6 months ago
Commented

This paragraph and the one after seem like they are not supposed to be here and are out of place.

JamesAnthony1999
JamesAnthony1999
6 months ago
Replied to Xerotia

Since I first made this comment this was the first time ever that I managed to go over 1 month before getting another like.

Stranger 4: I dream of you every night, please impregnate me mister Universe. Please Fuc...

Grandpa Universe In Multiverse [COMPLETE]

Grandpa Universe In Multiverse [COMPLETE]

Book&Literature · MisterImmortal

JamesAnthony1999
JamesAnthony1999
8 months ago
Commented

This one has my vote

●Emperor of Death is a Stay at Home Dad - Cultivaton Novel with an American MC. A man was accidentally sent to a World of Cultivation and dies in that world but he comes back to his original world and discovers that he has a daughter.

Star Wars: The Holy Empire

Star Wars: The Holy Empire

Movies · Necromancer_God

JamesAnthony1999
JamesAnthony1999
9 months ago
Replied to antonio_folino

You're right, got my math wrong. Thanks for the correction!

Instantly the gravity around him became 20 times greater meaning he was now lifting 30 tons. Not to mention that he now weighed 3,600 pounds making this even harder. 

The Knight of Ruin(DxD)

The Knight of Ruin(DxD)

Anime & Comics · A_Real_Werewolf234