Gabe_Lewis

Gabe_Lewis

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2018-09-09 加入 United States
徽章 7

Moments 3
Gabe_Lewis
Gabe_Lewis
1 months ago
Commented

He is the greatest father figure in any work I have ever seen

Despite only just getting to know them, Orion felt like he was already losing them. Inwardly cursing his bad luck, he could only agree.

Supreme Magus

Supreme Magus

Fantasy · Legion20

Gabe_Lewis
Gabe_Lewis
1 years ago
Posted

Has no world building and just hands the ‘MC’ everything in the first few chapters

Gabe_Lewis
Gabe_Lewis
1 years ago
Commented

Needs more world building to understand context but otherwise a good found ation