i am really shocked with all the pronoun mistakes!
Hearing that, Vice - President li glanced at su Cai and chuckled,""There's no mistake. The president personally sent him."
Lifetime of Bliss And Contentment With You
Urban · Jiong Jiong You Yao
something tells me Joan is a spy, something is really suspicious about that woman.
Tom's shocked face mirrored the frustration churning through William. "But how…? How did they even know the arch existed, or what our next move would be?"
Earning the Love of a Princess
History · Gabrielle_Johnson_6482
both have their own insecurities and trust issues, they both need to work out their issues if they truly want this relationship to work. Both of them assuming the other is going to cheat and being possessive is never a good combo in any relationship
umm, wonder if this new entity is a baby?!
"The light will weep with molten fury, a surrender shall awaken a new entity."
The Lycan's Sin
Fantasy · B_Mitchylle
I like the story's atmosphere (setting/mood), it's like a psychological thriller with supernatural elements. Breath of fresh air reading something a little different from other novels on here!! You have tremendous talent!!
For Eve's sake, I would be wary, especially when everyone in her past betrayed her, but then again, people can unexpectedly surprise you! Can't wait to see what happens!
A/N: Do you think Ophelia is an Ally or an enemy? :D
Eve's Gambit
Fantasy · B_Mitchylle
the story wise, is actually pretty good. only suggestion I would advise is for you to get an editor for the mistakes (it will help the story out and keep the readers engaged). Just keep honing your craft and don't get discouraged by the negativity.
wait, wouldn't he see her covered in blood, since her clothes had blood on them too?!
Like a mouse trapped, she watch the Tiger come closer. Too close. Any closer and he will smell the blood.
Unexpected Second Chance at Love
Urban · Abeehiltz
girl, you need to start putting the pieces together then you will realize they all are one in the same
Thus, in the next two games, Shi Yao spent one moment thinking that Legend was Mister Numbers, the next moment thinking that Legend was Lin Jiage, and the next moment, saying that her idol had wronged her, and the next moment that she had accidentally slandered him.
The Beautiful Time With You
Urban · Ye Fei Ye
is it miles, Mary, mari. .. why does the director's name keep changing? If you need an editor i can help.I will even do it for free, just so the story remains consistent.
At that time, even the director of the advertising department, Meryl, would not be able to cover up for it ...
Lifetime of Bliss And Contentment With You
Urban · Jiong Jiong You Yao