Aldrich1966

Aldrich1966

male LV 15

I am a good guy who likes to spend my free time reading. i like most kids of book that have to do with going to other words.

2018-07-20 加入 Global
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Aldrich1966
Aldrich1966
2 years ago
Posted

while I thinks this books is good so far but there is a big jump in the store from chapter 16 to 17 and I feel like there miss parts of the store that hold info we need

Aldrich1966
Aldrich1966
2 years ago
Posted

So far this book is a good read but please check your chapter placement you went form a boss fight to repet chapters. This make the store fall flat on it head.

Aldrich1966
Aldrich1966
2 years ago
Posted

love this book please update as soon as you can ¡!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!°°°!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Aldrich1966
Aldrich1966
2 years ago
Posted

After the little bit I could read this story look to be good but please get some one to edt your chapters. The writhing is all over the place and makes it hard to stay in the flow and understand what they are talking about.

Aldrich1966
Aldrich1966
2 years ago
Posted

great book. now that it is complete why is there still chapter that we have to pay more to read. All chapters should be open for everyone to read with out have to pay more than the chapters price

Aldrich1966
Aldrich1966
2 years ago
Commented

As a employee of G4S i thought you should no they have been bought out by Allied Universal

Aldrich1966
Aldrich1966
3 years ago
Posted

So far this book is really good and should keep getting better if what the intro says. Hope the mc turns out to be like what I and hoping. Just please don't kill of the parents.

Aldrich1966
Aldrich1966
3 years ago
Posted

I gave this book a low rating because it system talk to much about thing that don't need to be said and it make me think the another is using to just fill a word count.

Aldrich1966
Aldrich1966
4 years ago
Posted

This is a very good book to read. The MC seems to be a bit OP but that just make it cooler. Hope they keep this book going.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Aldrich1966
Aldrich1966
4 years ago
Posted

I could not even get the first chapter read the write was that bad. It make no sense and you can tell the authors first language is not English. if some one can help him out and fix all the problems this book whole be great.