that you put first blood in and use it instead of first kill for bosses or first clear for dungeons and quests will sooner or later annoy more people...
But there was nothing like a [Crystal Chest] in the forums and the information he gathered before. He was just aiming for the [Platinum Chest] that contained the [Phantom Cloak], the first blood reward from defeating the Midnight Phantom. But he ended up with much more than he expected.
MMORPG: Rebirth as an Alchemist
Games · MiuNovels
why did the "boss" fight seem like a turn based fight? he could have used the stick to hit it or cast heal on himself, and the burn that have 5% of target HP/min is really op, a lvl 1 spell potentially dealing millions of hp in damage to a high teir boss
the problem is that items can't stack, think how annoying/difficult minecraft would be if items could not stack...
Everyone's inventory had limits up to x999 items only regardless if it was a repetitive item. It was not stackable. Like for example, Ren's loot just now took a total of x12 space in his inventory.
MMORPG: Rebirth as an Alchemist
Games · MiuNovels
he could have taken the bodies...
After killing the two guards, the white haired man motioned for the group to move forward. John and the group stepped over the dead bodies and entered the mansion. Being late in the night, the mansion was dark inside, with only a few lanterns lit throughout the mansion.
Ascension of the Immortal Asura
Fantasy · rRandom
the world is incredibly detailed qt the start with all the small hits about it, I have high hopes for this novel since several others I have read just throws waay too much Information and details on you and it messes up the pacing
it's good but can you please edit the chapter so the capital letters that are everywhere are removed? it will be much easier to read it then, I'm guessing that many people stopped reading because of them
Good so far, but place edit the overwhelming ammount of capital letters I almost every sentence and make is consistent ie Ancient Voice and in the next sentence it's Ancient voice... put only the important thing I capital letter like Fate or don't
about 10 points for one credit
- 29 credits.
The Tale of the Void Emperor
Fantasy · LivingVoid
the acceleration seems abit low for a "super duper scifi high tech" car
"…The Siebel Tuatara's exterior design takes its inspiration from a unique lizard. It comes equipped with a 7.0 litre, V8 supercharged turbo engine. It has a maximum horsepower of 1350 HP and a maximum speed of 443 kilometers per hour. It has a 0-100 acceleration capability of 2.78 seconds."
Reincarnation: Multi-skilled Goddess Is So Beautiful!
Urban · Prosperity Every Year
yeah, some sci fi movie where if you dident pay your debts the collectors came and took the organs that they had the debt on, even if they people died
Ren wasn't worried, though, since he could still open an account even if he didn't have the money –– yet. He would apply for an organ loan among the many loans they offered with a time frame of one year.
MMORPG: Rebirth as an Alchemist
Games · MiuNovels