Erelbrinx

Erelbrinx

male LV 5

Just someone that keeps dreaming.

2018-06-27 加入 Global
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Erelbrinx
Erelbrinx
4 days ago
Commented

I would rather read a monotonous writing of only the Mc narrating of what happened than to read these dialogues that is impossible to understand who is talking and when. I didn't expect a writing to be so in chaos.

Erelbrinx
Erelbrinx
3 months ago
Commented

They captured gang leader easily but than he escaped as easily. We get all that talk about how they can't face the pirates just to be forced to move without horses... It just feels forced.

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Erelbrinx
Erelbrinx
4 months ago
Replied to FallenEnt

I mean there are laws preventing wizards from disclosing their magic to muggles too, isn't there? So, it doesn't really affect anything.

Of course, as the parents of a new student at Hogwarts, they signed a confidentiality agreement with Professor McGonagall on the first day, promising not to tell any non-magical people about the magical world and fulfilling their obligation to keep magic items out of the Muggle world.

Wizarding world of Harry Potter

Wizarding world of Harry Potter

Book&Literature · Webnovel_Addicted

Erelbrinx
Erelbrinx
4 months ago
Replied to Polo_King

The future changed from the day 1 . You can't have 3 dragons and still expect it to play out the same way. That would ruin the story.

Now, she found herself in King's Landing, a lady-in-waiting to Princess Rhaella, the future queen. But she was not blind to the glances Prince Aerys had cast her way during the royal family's visits to Casterly Rock. Aerys had wanted her. She had braced herself for his advances upon her arrival at court. Yet, to her astonishment, Aerys refrained. His glances were no longer filled with desire or lust; they were tinged with regret and pity.

The Fireborne Prince (GOT)

The Fireborne Prince (GOT)

Book&Literature · NobleVillainess

Erelbrinx
Erelbrinx
5 months ago
Replied to System_Department

Yeah, but you would at least wouldn't do the criticism in front of matriacrh out of respect for her.

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Erelbrinx
Erelbrinx
6 months ago
Replied to Erelbrinx

Also, the grammer is not bad at all. Not to the extend that you would bother to leave a comment about it.

Say whatever you want to me, but I have one demand. Come with a solution. I dont wanna hear ya'll yapping about "your grammar is so bad" "this isnt engaging" 

Star Wars: Senator

Star Wars: Senator

Movies · L0rds2278

Erelbrinx
Erelbrinx
6 months ago
Commented

Since I started reading Mtl, i became immune to bad grammer. For those who complain, I suggest they start reading some mtl.

Say whatever you want to me, but I have one demand. Come with a solution. I dont wanna hear ya'll yapping about "your grammar is so bad" "this isnt engaging" 

Star Wars: Senator

Star Wars: Senator

Movies · L0rds2278

Erelbrinx
Erelbrinx
1 years ago
Commented

You would think you need a light for a shadow to exist, right?

However, Sunny's soul was dark and lightless.

Shadow Slave

Shadow Slave

Fantasy · Guiltythree

Erelbrinx
Erelbrinx
1 years ago
Commented

I hate mind control. I think it kills the story if used to obtain loyalty, manipulation, and such. It just leads to an uninteresting plot.

[Not only could you use mind power to control objects without touching them, but you can even modify the mind and will of others as long as their willpower is weaker than yours.]

World Travel Simulator System In Modern Society

World Travel Simulator System In Modern Society

Fantasy · ShadowKatake

Erelbrinx
Erelbrinx
1 years ago
Commented

So it was the color of his eyes that she found a problem with. I thought she meant the perverted look in Mc's eyes lol. I was like how degenerate the Mc has to be to look that way even in a newborn baby.

The Maester rushed over to inspect me and looked into both of my little slitted Red eyes, he moved a finger in front of my face and my little eyes followed it.

Degenerate Reborn In House Of The Dragon

Degenerate Reborn In House Of The Dragon

Book&Literature · SERBMADHAUS

  • Basilisk Reborn original

    Basilisk Reborn

    Book&Literature

    4.55

    Its life was nothing but misery. Since it's birth, it was forced to obey that wizard called Salazar. It didn't have any freedom or will to do as it wished. Not only him, but, it also had to obey his successors as well. Until the successor arrives, it was put to deep sleep. Once it was awakened from its sleep, it met the boy named Tom. Even though it had to obey his command to harm the people he targeted, those were the only times it was freed from its cage. Freedom didn't last long and it was again forced into its cage until it could be freed again. When it was awakened once more, it was delighted with the taste of freedom, until that old bastard came and ruined it all. Dumbledore found the secret chamber and forced it to obey him as well. It was confused as to how someone that he didn't recognize as a successor could command it. Because it was sure that old guy wasn't the successor it had to obey, not at all. After that, it was forced to play along with the stage that old bastard prepared. It first lost its sight because of that old man's bird than killed by a little boy. If not forced to hold back, how could such a weakling be able to kill him? After it's death, the Basilisk was reborn as a human baby. Free from the chains that have been forced on it, it decided to rise to power so never again in its life it will be forced to obey others. --------------------------------------------------------------------------- In the Harry Potter series, the basilisk is supposed to be a female. But in this story, it is a male. Not that it has any importance to the story. --------------------------------------------------------------------------- I don't own the Harry Potter or the cover picture. It is just a fan-fiction. ---------------------------------------------------------------------------

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  • The Fatestone original

    The Fatestone

    Fantasy

    "Send them. Send all the pain and sorrow my way. After all, it wouldn't be the first time. I endured every single one of them, I will endure this one too." Dean shouted to his cruel fate. --------------------------------------------------------------------------- Since he was born, his life was full of hardship. But, he never admitted defeat and worked as hard as he can all his life to have a better future. But it was all futile in the end. His imminent death looming over him he decided to live his remaining days to the fullest. But it was too short and wasn't enough at all. There were just too many things he wanted to do. While leaving himself to the darkness, he thought what would it be like if he had another chance at life. With these thoughts, he closed his eyes just to open them to find himself in a whole new world. --------------------------------------------------------------------------- This story will contain: Another World, Magic, Romance, Dungeons, Slice of Life, No-Harem, No-Ntr, No-System (Only basic status), Kingdom Building (Maybe) --------------------------------------------------------------------------- Release rates; Top 100 - Daily Chapter + 3 bonus chapters a week Top 200 - Daily Chapter Top 300 - 5 Chapters a week Top 500 - 4 Chapters a week Minimum 3 Chapters a week _______________________________ I don't own the cover picture _______________________________

    3 Chs 7 收藏

  • The Pioneer: Age of Immortality original

    The Pioneer: Age of Immortality

    Urban

    The humanity was welcoming a new age, "Age of Immortality", while Liam Powell was struggling to stay alive as a blind and homeless man. Eventually, he succumbed to the harsh conditions he was living in, he died. After his death, Liam is reborn as his 22 year old self, at a point where he could prevent his life going in the same direction as it did in his previous one. This time he is determined to live his life to the fullest with his loved ones. There were still few years until the world experienced a great change and entered a new era. With the knowledge of the future, he started treading his own path. There were no predecessor that could light his path or guide him. He was the pioneer.

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