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Such A Forced Labor Camp

2018-06-27 加入 Global
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ForcedLabor
ForcedLabor
1 years ago
Posted

The idea is interesting but doesn't feel good to read. The arranged marriage felt a bit meh, but turning dumbledore into a bad guy is really dumb as some other people pointed out in the end he died and his Patronus is phoenix which is part of the white magic school, If Dumbledore was evil to being with then he'd probably be unable to use Patronus. TLDR: Was promising however very poorly executed, felt very very forced.

ForcedLabor
ForcedLabor
2 years ago
Commented

But... won't others think he is rich then and target him because of his shiny gold coins?

As the saying goes, if you don't want to find trouble with others, others will.

I Am Such An Expert; Why Do I Have To Take In Disciples

I Am Such An Expert; Why Do I Have To Take In Disciples

Eastern · Wood Easily Starts Fires

ForcedLabor
ForcedLabor
2 years ago
Commented

Sakura as useless as always, only spamming shannaro.

ForcedLabor
ForcedLabor
2 years ago
Replied to AStrAl_Soul

There is nothing about harem in the synopsis nor tags. Stop doing drugs.

She was Uncle Ben's daughter, Jennifer Charles.

My Hollywood System

My Hollywood System

Movies · DreamThree

ForcedLabor
ForcedLabor
2 years ago
Commented

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Yes, above me in the air, there was my grandpa looking at me while floating in the sky.

I am the young master

I am the young master

Eastern · Amiro0o

ForcedLabor
ForcedLabor
2 years ago
Commented

´LOL What a BETA BITCH Xd

Taking a deep breath, his vision turned dark and he passed out.

The Author's POV

The Author's POV

Fantasy · Entrail_JI

ForcedLabor
ForcedLabor
2 years ago
Replied to ApoloSilver

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"I agree, their lineage is indeed impressive, but that's not what makes them great. The blood sweat and tears they put into their training are what make them this good. Just because they were born with successful parents doesn't mean they will also be successful. Unless you put in the work, no matter how talented you are, you won't ever be strong"

The Author's POV

The Author's POV

Fantasy · Entrail_JI

ForcedLabor
ForcedLabor
2 years ago
Replied to Injustice

Well there will be changes to the original plotline for sure, but the changes have already been made seems to be correct since Hashirama already knew Kakashi when they fought during konoha invasion.

As for the impact, there may be some, but it is within the controllable range.

Naruto: The Strongest Kakashi

Naruto: The Strongest Kakashi

Anime & Comics · Iampoorguy

ForcedLabor
ForcedLabor
2 years ago
Commented

Ofc she is going to be... forever useless.

Sakura nodded firmly when she heard this. She didn't want to stand behind them all the time. She hopes that she can grow stronger and fight side by side with them!

Naruto: The Strongest Kakashi

Naruto: The Strongest Kakashi

Anime & Comics · Iampoorguy

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