lucas123

lucas123

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2018-05-16 加入 Brazil
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lucas123
lucas123
1 years ago
Posted

I enjoyed this story and I like the premise, but this is a complaint review. I still recommend giving this a shot. personal opinions. 1. The MC has personal problems and apparently doesn't make an effort to solve them, he just runs away from his problems instead of facing them head on. there are hours when he seems to have matured but ends up proving the opposite.... 2. His relationship with Monica has come to dominate at least half of the story and it's exhausting reading about it at this point. It was interesting at first, but now it's just repetitive. The story went from being about the MC getting stronger and traveling across the universe to find his nemesis and now it's about how he will do anything for their relationship.... 3. The MC is disgusted when the global army tries to order or control him, but apparently he is willing to listen to any orders from his girlfriend's family like a dog.

lucas123
lucas123
1 years ago
Commented

honestly it will be disappointing if George dies and Monica is still alive

lucas123
lucas123
1 years ago
Commented

unfortunately this story apparently turned into a novel, that's not for me. thanks Author. And goodbye

lucas123
lucas123
1 years ago
Replied to J_h85

this is something I've been talking about for a while, about him always finding a way not to face what needs to be faced. And always running away from his mental issues

lucas123
lucas123
2 years ago
Commented

I believe that this novel differs from the others when the Khan is more alone and focused on himself.

lucas123
lucas123
2 years ago
Commented

i hope khan prioritizes his strength, and doesn't put the improvements aside

lucas123
lucas123
2 years ago
Commented

finally that and chaos, thanks for the great chapter Eve

lucas123
lucas123
2 years ago
Replied to CanorBrando

I agree with you, for me the story is losing its shine with all this romance

lucas123
lucas123
2 years ago
Commented

unfortunately my theory is right the mc becoming explosive

lucas123
lucas123
2 years ago
Commented

great chapter