Guilherme_azambuja

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Guilherme_azambuja
18 days ago
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I have mixed feelings about this story, I like the whole premise and the character additions, the writing is good enough and the protagonist is charismatic... my problem with this story are some details, the first point is the refusal of the protagonist in getting stronger(I currently read up to chapter 17 and despite the protagonist being weakened and having lost some abilities, the protagonist believes that it is an excellent idea to change to a weaker body, like most readers I don't like nerfs ), second problem, the protagonist is virgin resents this and does nothing to solve it (even though he has lived for thousands of years), and third and final problem, he died on Earth as a teenager and lived thousands of years as a demon in the underworld, and despite the interactions and environment he lived in most of his life he still acts like a Japanese teenager... I feel like he didn't have the growth he should have had considering the time he lived and the environment he grew up in... I think it's a good story and I wish the author luck but I believe it's not a story for me.

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Guilherme_azambuja
5 months ago
Commented

Eminence in shadows

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Guilherme_azambuja
6 months ago
Posted

https://m.fanfiction.net/s/5199602/1/The-Thief-of-Hogwarts https://m.fanfiction.net/s/5199602/1/The-Thief-of-Hogwarts https://m.fanfiction.net/s/5199602/1/The-Thief-of-Hogwarts https://m.fanfiction.net/s/5199602/1/The-Thief-of-Hogwarts https://m.fanfiction.net/s/5199602/1/The-Thief-of-Hogwarts https://m.fanfiction.net/s/5199602/1/The-Thief-of-Hogwarts

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Guilherme_azambuja
1 years ago
Commented

freyja stays in the harem

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Guilherme_azambuja
1 years ago
Commented

Mc got pretty generic

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Guilherme_azambuja
1 years ago
Commented

fourth and fifth wishes I found unnecessary

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