Generic and lacking character. Two advantages of game novels are the option for creative world design and the option to have characters fail or die with limited consequences. Instead we got a generic fantasy world where his "talent" (a system that would never work IRL due to the imbalance caused) removes any sense of tension by giving him a ridiculous equipment, levelling and skill advantage over any other player. It's really cringy to have the MC called a "great god" for winning a lottery and the antagonists obviously went to How to be an Arrogant Young Master 101. At least in the first 30 chapters, MC has no real character of note (no relationships, quirks, personality), instead just following the rather dull plot line no questions asked. Overall, story is readable but very generic.
Nemo - (Entry for Chapter 2958) A spiritual product which fuses a mutated spirellian spike fish and fragments of two design seeds. Spiritual Ingredients The spirellian spike fish (Chapter 234) have tough spikes that enable extradimensional communication (substitute material in quantum entanglement nodes), swim in unison in a coordinated fashion, and with large enough numbers, can communicate over several light years by pooling their power together. The mutated individual would be genetically defective and thus would have to replicate these abilities through spiritual means. The fragments of the design seeds are from Aisling Curver (neural interconnectivity) and Moltar Ringer (signal disruption)(Chapter 2198). Speciality Nemo is designed to facilitate large-scale synchronised and coordinated movement and positioning of friendly troops through a large-scale spiritual / neural network and to impair the enemy's ability to do the same by disabling their communications. Its triggered ability generates a large spiritual pulse that jams signals (friend and foe alike), though leaves the network unaffected. For obvious reasons, more sophisticated technology is harder to disrupt. Aesthetic The design spirit's form is a mute young male mermaid with silver scales and fins and silver spikes sticking out all over his body. Its young appearance links to its status as a spiritual product and lack of offensive abilities whilst its muteness links to its properties of signal disruption and disabling communication. The name of the design spirit is a homage to the Nautilus of the Deep (Captain Nemo), where Ves first encountered this particular species of fish. In addition, Nemo means "no-one" which is suitable for a design spirit orientated around augmenting groups rather than individual mechs. Purpose Its primary role would be to serve as a design Spirit for the mechs of the Living Sentinels, which emphasis more of a "quantity over quality" approach and would develop alongside Casella Ingvar, who seems to be developing around leadership. Stats Intelligence: 3 Adaptability: 2 Ability Diversity: 2 Ability Power: 3
The Mech Touch
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