Pudgy

male LV 15

Rotund

2018-03-03 加入 United States
徽章 16

Moments 3
Pudgy
Pudgy
9 months ago
Posted

I started reading because it was free. I made it to chapter 77 before I couldn't read anymore. The translation is horrible swapping genders names realms and so on. Besides the translation the main character just gets everything handed to him and has no significant growth achieved through his own efforts, no crises that he can't overcome and always warned of danger beforehand. It may get better later on but I just can't power through even if it is free.

Pudgy
Pudgy
11 months ago
Commented

Daknes sounds like a person from new Jersey was saying Darkness

Pudgy
Pudgy
4 years ago
Posted

Great story to start. However it has a tooon of filler. I mean how many back to back tournament s do you need to cram in? I was disappointed by the rushed ending however the story was decent overall.