Him crying at the end was a little off in my eyes. One moment he is ill kill again if need be, and the next he's having an identity crisis
I'm a harsh critique and I rate this easily top 5 books on this site. This is near published book quality and a book you should not sleep on. My only grievance is the pacing is sometimes faster than it should be in my opinion lately and the first few initial chapters made the characters seem like genius. It was and has been a pleasure to read.
Hey Author. I saw the hiatus I'm unsure when that started but I wanted to reach out and say I've enjoyed your work greatly. I will be leaving a review as well. looking forward to the continuation of Jonathan and Poul's story.
great read. I've read this front to back and it's been good all round. a couple "plot holes" I imagine you'll wrap up eventually. I wanted to see more interaction with going toe to toe with the elite. it was mentioned earlier going into mining coal for the power plants, and iron I believe to go up against Carnegie. I would say I'm surprised the US hasn't done anything about the monopoly they are building but in this time there were no legislation I believe. keep up the good work
Can anyone remind me where he got this much exp? I remember in the previous town he did some xp pit but was it this much? he could have leveled himself up on route to the capital instead.
[6,070,092 XP has been allocated.]
MMORPG: Rise of the Primordial Godsmith
Games · TrueDawn
illusion space was going to be a given until reading that he could only drag his tier or lower. Disperse followed by ice world. unless illusion can be buffed(?)
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MMORPG : Rebirth Of The Strongest Vampire God
Games · Raj_Shah_7152
is this an upgrade to his already learned skill?
[ Disperse ] - An elite move used by only the most precise warriors, it involves locating the chokepoint of any attack and breaking it by attacking its critical point.
MMORPG : Rebirth Of The Strongest Vampire God
Games · Raj_Shah_7152
nature's whisperer and thunderbolt. I can these working well as thuderbolt requires a cloud of some sort(?). also pretty wicked if he could later use the destructive power in the lightning that he just got hit with. That and with more spells of other elements to follow. the man needs some 1 on 1 firepower too. side note I'd love to see our dwarf best man with the bhudda skill.
[ Nature Whisperer ] - Command nature to bend to your will, stop tearing winds, calm raging seas, summon rain clouds at will amongst many other abilities.
MMORPG : Rebirth Of The Strongest Vampire God
Games · Raj_Shah_7152
honestly don't want him going down the full evil route. and releasing a plague or leveling a city kills innocents... so na
I would give it all 5s but there are some grammar mistakes and some poorly written sentences but very far in between.I'm 60 pgs in and I'm wondering how this novel is not more well-known. very well done so far. It is a slow read when compared to other web novels, but I have enjoyed each chapter.if you want to read a story of the coming of age of a prodigy and his real struggles as he tries to make the world a better place, take a read.
The Bringer of Light
History · Bolt_1